| "Captive Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:31 CDT
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Reviewed By: Sun Shine On: September 03, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: Sun Shine On: September 03, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:40 CDT
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: September 02, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS GETTING SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD SO KEEP GOING AND I JUST LOVE HOW INU ACTED IN THIS CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 16:41 CDT
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: September 02, 2004 15:35 CDT
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Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 10:04 CDT
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: September 01, 2004 23:14 CDT
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yus! tis updated!
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Reviewed By: hispanic On: August 30, 2004 20:27 CDT
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you know what? you suck big ones. your story is so good. i never get my stories to go to far i loose interest. please finish this dog-gone story im die'n here.
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Reviewed By: Jennifer Jaroniewski On: August 07, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! What a great story. Update soon!! I wanna read more really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:20 CDT
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nonononononononononononono...u had to end it there just when it was getting good didn't ya? didn't ya? waggghhhhhh ::tears:: *cough cough* srry me and my moments anyways you have so totally got to update as soon as u get the chance it was awesome. UPDATE. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yr stories are great! I love them and I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: July 11, 2004 22:44 CDT
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This is soo kawaii! I can't wiat until you get another chapter out! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 14:31 CDT
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Cool story! It was nice... but one thing... No offense but you have to improve your grammar... sometimes i couldn't understand a word you were trying to say (or write)... the other people are right... anyways... enough with the negative stuff. Your story was GREAT but you have to upload some more chapters! They were getting good until you stopped putting them up... Please hurry up and update! *i'm getting bored* PS: Sorry if i'm getting annoying and very rude
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