| "Captive Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:47 CDT
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I unno how to pronounce yen....I heard it in the 1st movie where Kagome screamed it when she shot Inu Yasha with her arrow to the Goshinkubo tree. :S.Its like just....yen?
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD BUT HOW DO YOU PRONOUNCE YEN?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 29, 2004 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I like the paring but I have to agree with sublimetrickster the story needs more depth. There is so much you could do with this instesd of the "They need her because shes a miko and can help defeat Naraku" plot. I love that plot, but spice it up a bit. I've got ideas right now that I wouldn't mind running by you if you wanted. With that said I have to ask you. How many reviewers have told you to work and your spelling and grammar? Not in just this story but others? You don't seem to be trying even with us begging you to. Please if you don't want to at least prof-read your own work then get an editor! I'm sure someone would be glad to help you! But these mistakes are like road bumps in the story and there are a lot of them. I like the story okay so far really, but please try harder.
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is good! just some grammar mistakes, but I'm not better... anyway, keep it up ;)
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Title: Hey Good News Friends!
Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:04 CDT
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Hello everyone! It is I MikoMaiden heheh!I have a new website with episode clips,movie clips and music and such.So come on.Its a Inu/Ksg shrine and a Mir/Sang shrine! Read the character bios and shit its really cool! Arigato! http://www.geocities.com/inuyashaandkagome04/
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Title: huh
Reviewed By: Konno On: June 28, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh i hate Kagome! its not fair. Two hotties...one cutie...all for her...that sucks...it's just not fair...oh well..i'll get over it. Update please. oh and work on ur grammer.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 28, 2004 17:06 CDT
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nice.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO THIS IS GETTING GOOD
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 25, 2004 16:03 CDT
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nice update =)
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster On: June 25, 2004 13:26 CDT
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I'm sure you plan to get to this eventually, but I'm a bit confused as to why InuYasha and Sesshomoru need Kagome. You need a better reason then what you've given so far. Sure she's pretty, but there are an awful lot of prettier Demonesses I'm sure. I don't know your plan for the story, and I look forward to reading it ot find out, but maybe the reasons they want Kagome specifically is they sense the strong magic around her that allows only her to pass through time? Maybe the Shikon is like a pheromone in her that draws demons to her? I don't know, just thoughts. Keep up the good story telling!
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Title: Amreld
Reviewed By: Stolen Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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Good story! but you really should work on your grammar. I have to say it sucks major ass. You should see if anyone would like to be a beta reader. I would, but I alredy have enough on my hands from my own story. ^_^ Ja ne! Keep writing! Amreld
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Reviewed By: Eternal Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Sesshoumaru/Kagome/InuYasha fics are so rare and I love that triangle! And I'm not against Kouga either...*giggles* anyway! This is a very good fic, well written and with lots of description. I love when Seshsoumaru goes all possessive of Kagome! Can't wait till the mating starts! PLease hurry up with the next chapter! I can't wait to read more! Eternal Cosmos
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:27 CDT
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hey no fair!!! kagomes lucky now!! two hot demons with her*drools* oh well update^^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOO YUMMY
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 24, 2004 19:30 CDT
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interesting .. =)
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