| "Captive Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: September 01, 2004 23:14 CDT
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yus! tis updated!
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Reviewed By: hispanic On: August 30, 2004 20:27 CDT
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you know what? you suck big ones. your story is so good. i never get my stories to go to far i loose interest. please finish this dog-gone story im die'n here.
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Reviewed By: Jennifer Jaroniewski On: August 07, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! What a great story. Update soon!! I wanna read more really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:20 CDT
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nonononononononononononono...u had to end it there just when it was getting good didn't ya? didn't ya? waggghhhhhh ::tears:: *cough cough* srry me and my moments anyways you have so totally got to update as soon as u get the chance it was awesome. UPDATE. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yr stories are great! I love them and I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: July 11, 2004 22:44 CDT
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This is soo kawaii! I can't wiat until you get another chapter out! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 14:31 CDT
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Cool story! It was nice... but one thing... No offense but you have to improve your grammar... sometimes i couldn't understand a word you were trying to say (or write)... the other people are right... anyways... enough with the negative stuff. Your story was GREAT but you have to upload some more chapters! They were getting good until you stopped putting them up... Please hurry up and update! *i'm getting bored* PS: Sorry if i'm getting annoying and very rude
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 00:17 CDT
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Well your spelling has improved a little but you still need help. You need to start putting spaces after your periods and commas. Seperate your dialogue from the descriptive parts of the story because the conversations are confusing to read. Plus it will make your chapters look longer. Think about seperating the character's thoughts too, because sometiems it's hard to tell when they're thinking and not talking. Other than that everything is fine. I don't want you to think that I'm riding you or trying to tell you what to do. These things I'v listed are what YOU need to do to improve your writing. Your stories are good but the spelling and grammar make them look like a 5th grader's work. And thats just being honest, there is no nice way to put that. I wish you luck, and update soon!
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Title: EvilAngel69
Reviewed By: EvilAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW BOUT THIS, KAGOME SAYS YES WITH THE EXCEPTION THAT SHE CAN VISIT HER FAMILY WHENEVER SHE WANTS?!?!?
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 11:01 CDT
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Reviewed By: Mezus On: July 05, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were some spelling mistakes and i got a little bit confused but its a great story! i hope you continue writing and please UPDATE ASAP!!!! tankies! ~ SexyChicklet17 ~
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOO THIS IS VERY GOOD PLEASE MAKE MORE
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:29 CDT
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Hey all good news! Ive made a whole new site! Distilled Elegane= A Kikyo Shrine. It is through Kikyo's eyes so it is depressing but very touching so come visit and email me your thoughts! http://www.geocities.com/kikyoshinto/ MikoMaiden
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:49 CDT
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O ya I just updated my Inu/Kag Mir/Sang site so come visit!Ep clips,music,images you name it!Fancition and FanArt too!Send them in please! ^_^! www.geocities.com/inuyashaandkagome04/index.html
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