| "Captive Heat" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mademoiselle Morte [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 19:34 CDT
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oooooh nice story, though i hope Kagome accepts sessho and Inuyasha and Sessho's attitude, grrr he could be a bit nicer but oh well, hopefully he will after he's mated with her? It makes sense!
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gomen ne! "Don't you DARE not continue this fic!"....Gomen ne! Despite the spelling and grammar errors, this is a great and fun fic. Normally, such errors detract, however, your fic is an exception to this by being so fun and entertaining. It really would be a shame not to continue this fic. If you have a mailing list to notify readers of updates, I would be most pleased to be added to such a list. Sincerely, Vyncent weretigress@earthlink.net
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: September 03, 2004 13:56 CDT
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HAHA. Even through all of that... that was was the funniest chapter yet!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 11:26 CDT
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: September 03, 2004 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao keep up the good work update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princss - not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Kagome, she's getting......pleasured in the middle of the hallway. lol, its so funny. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chey On: September 03, 2004 01:41 CDT
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Please do continue this story I find it very interesting.
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:31 CDT
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Reviewed By: Sun Shine On: September 03, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: Sun Shine On: September 03, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:40 CDT
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: September 02, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS GETTING SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD SO KEEP GOING AND I JUST LOVE HOW INU ACTED IN THIS CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 16:41 CDT
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: September 02, 2004 15:35 CDT
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Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 10:04 CDT
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