| "Dreams do come true" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel horrible. I've been reading this story for like forever and I just realized I haven't even given you a reiview I guess that's a little selfish. I love your story it's well thought out and the one thing that kept me mesmorized was the line from "Stay the night part 2": Her words flooded him like hot oil, fueling the flames that burnt deep inside. That was simply ingenous. I'm sorry for typing such a long reiview I guess I'm known for that. ^_^!
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Reviewed By: shywaii_gurl On: July 25, 2004 20:43 CDT
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ahhhhhh this is a good fic! dont stop its really getting somewhere! keep updating!
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:47 CDT
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whoa
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 20:11 CDT
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I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 20, 2004 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have your inspiration right here! This always seems to get me motivated. http://content.collegehumor.com/media/movies/starbucks-nometa.mov hehehehe Just insert your name when they say 'Glen' and 'Roy' ! I liked the chapter, it wasn't stupid =P Gotta love 2 pissed off brothers, hehe. I like how Mr. Yung pisses him self when ever he gets scared. I bet he wrecks a lot of pants that way, and chair, to say the least. Does Hojo piss himself too? Or maybe worse? hahaha. Bad bad writers block, go away! Anywho, Loved the chapter, love the story; keep on keepin' on! ---Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signedin On: July 14, 2004 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ouuuuuuuuuuuuuu. one word: good.. wait.. no.. GREAT! two pissed off brothers= not good, lol. sorry for the short review, will write more later. loved it! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 03:09 CDT
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uh oh demons are on the loose... ^__^ Bye bye evil! I like the story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 11:24 CDT
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i love it please update soon
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Reviewed By: PJ On: July 08, 2004 00:30 CDT
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I like this fic please update with new chapters soon. I look forward to reading this fic everyday
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Title: WOW WOW WOW...why do i bother with titles? dotn answer that
Reviewed By: inuyasha loves me aint bothering to sign in On: July 07, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and i was 8 months old too when i started taking and i didnt have a first word...I had a first sentence! Aisterua nesi Reika-nee-chan. which translates into I love you my wonder big sister Reika! Oh Im Japanese by the way!!!!! And i live your stpry it is so sweet!!!!! And kawii!!!!!!!! GOOD WORK AND PLEASE UP DATE OR WHATEVER SOON Jane ne Americans spell Japanese stuff weird....InuYasha loves me! AKA Kagome Yarbrough
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:37 CDT
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Whoa! I didn't say I couldn't stand your story anymore! I like your story! I said I could not stand to keep quiet anymore and pointed out a very small error in word usage. I really did not mean to make you upset and I am sorry that I did not make myself clear. The educator in me forces me to mentally correct papers even when the paper does not belong to a student. Don't sweat it! You have a fine story and considering the length, a few typos are expected here and there. Now take a deep breath and repeat after me, "They love my story! They love my story! They love my story!" Feel better? I hope so....
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Reviewed By: Aitu- NOT signed IN On: July 06, 2004 16:09 CDT
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ahahahahahahaha. I'm still laughing at the "Where do babies come from" bit. Especially the plotting that Sesshoumaru did with Sorano, muhahaha. And so the plot thickens as well as my interest for this story! Keep on keepin' on! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: July 06, 2004 13:42 CDT
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Yeah, Sessoumaru & Rin are officially together!But I feel sorry for what Sess will do to Kagura & Kanna if he meets them. No one pisses Sess off & gets away with it. I hope Inu doesn't get hurt by the assasin. That would be too aggravating.
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Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen-not signed in On: July 06, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read one chapter and my computer died. I was soooo sad. But it's fixed now so I am very very happy ^_^ Now I can read your story again! Yay for me! I love it...keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- do I ever sign in? On: July 05, 2004 22:22 CDT
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Oh wow, that was priceless, in the begining, hehehehe. Ah, a child's innocence. Too bad that never lasts. Now what happens if she can recall these memories from her child hood? lol. I really like your whole spin on the mating mark thingie. It's a nice change from the whole biting of the neck deal. Well, this reviewer is sleepy and will now be going to bed. Buhh-Byeee --Aitu
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