| "The Slave Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 14:42 CDT
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That was a good chapter. i hope you update again soon. don't worry though about you know trying to get it done as soon as possible though. I like that you cleared up the fact that he doesn't have to litterally see her in order for him not to get shocked. can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 12:03 CDT
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really good please continue i want to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: okie pokie On: September 29, 2004 20:59 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wind Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 16:34 CDT
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Fine! Don't update. See if I care. >:( ...Just Kidding! Update! Or atleast let us know when your going to. :) Plllleeeaaseee.
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Reviewed By: Wind Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:48 CDT
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UUUUUUppppppdddddaaaaatttteee!!! please :)
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Reviewed By: defa On: September 05, 2004 18:33 CDT
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one word TIGHT
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Reviewed By: darkangel767 On: September 04, 2004 17:51 CDT
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AWESOME!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Engelina On: September 03, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm begging you, please post this at AdultFanFiction.Net too! This site always gives me problems where I can't see new chapters until at least a month (if I stay away from the site long enough) after its been updated. This is such a great story and I really want to read it but I can't because of this site. Even now when I click on your bio it says that you haven't visited this site since June when obviously its wrong because you just updated chapter 2. So please help me out! I'll be eternally grateful!
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:18 CDT
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intresting
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Reviewed By: badkid2004 On: August 27, 2004 15:52 CDT
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please more chaps.
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Title: The Slave Trade
Reviewed By: Beauty2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 12:21 CDT
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Wow, I really like your story. Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: La la la On: August 24, 2004 19:06 CDT
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Finally!!!! Awesome chapter, update soon!
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Title: I DEMAND!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKED IT SO MUCH I DEMAND YOU UPDATE ASAP! ^_^ LOVE YA!
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 24, 2004 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK that chapter was good really good!! i cant wait till your next chapter!! i look to see if you update just about everyday so yeah!!!! Im alittle.....alot weirder than normal people but anyways loved the chappie so please updat soon like today!!! please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: August 23, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor inu!!!! please update
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