| "The Slave Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. it has a good plot and it makes me laugh. really, murdering a poor defenceless carrot making many baby carrots fatherless and getting tied to a tree by a plant obbsessed youaki? REALLY?!?!?!?!?!?!? that was so funny i almost cried!!! lol!!!!!!! poor miroku, that just wasnt his day was it? plz continue the story, it really is really good and i cant wait to see what happens next. u havent updated in like 5 years for gods sake!! plz update! ^-^
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 20:29 CDT
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I hope you update soon cuz this is very funny
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:05 CDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: CeruleanBtrFly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're pretty good, but I've noticed some parts that are obviously not origional. I've read them in another fanfic, and I double checked... The idea of Inuyasha's rosary being an electroshock device... this was one of them, and the part where she asks his opinion on her appearance and he replies unemotionally... this was another. I hope i dont see anymore of this.
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This is a waaaaayyy cool story!!! I hope that you check the reviews and notice that sooooooooooooo many poeple have asked that you update and that you fulfill the requests!!!
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Title: Wooot
Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Adore this story. I love it beyond anything sane! The only reason that the enjoyment factor is 8 instead of 10 is because i do wish that you would update (The average 5 or so months has passed and still no chapter) PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! I will send you chocolate? Muahahaha Bribery works right? CHOCOLATE! lol I'm not crazy i'm just insane, please update, I love your story. You are My God...yes...Goodnight (it's 2 30 am i'm sorry if this doesn't make sense).
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Title: the poor fatherless carotts
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awsome story! Some typos but we all have them. I'm truly deeply in love with this fic and will be waiting ever so patiently for the next update^^
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Title: rena555
Reviewed By: rena555 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: redfluffydice05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really like this fic, very creative and you put the characters in a different situation, but kept their personalities in check! Very nice! But, um, carrots??? *bunnies attack* Nnnoooo!
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 22:23 CDT
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*bangs herself on head cuz she forgot something* DUH... Forgot to give you your chocolate... *pours buckets and buckets and buckets (cont. forever) of every kind of chocolate imaginable on Inu Fan.* :-D Just remember this name: LaLa13. I'm going places ;)
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 22:15 CDT
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That was SO funny!!! And you said 'carrot' seven times in the actual story. You are like the coolest author ever. Using a code as a disclaimer... very cool. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! I'm begging you for mercy, because I haven't updated my fanfics for like 4 months... but you are so much better than me!! You can do it! *starts a cheer for inu fan* 2 4 6 8 who do we appreciate... INU FAN!!! *screams like an obsessed fan* WOO HOO! LOL, LaLa13 P.S. WE WANT FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 18:48 CDT
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update asap please!!
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: August 03, 2005 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AWSOME A NEW CHAPPY! I LOVE IT! great job on this one too im so glad you updated this story i love it! please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Mayven On: August 01, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of Inu fanfics and this one is vry creative. It takes the characters and puts them in a new and interesting situation without losing their personalities. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:15 CDT
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ARGH!!!! golly you stopped before it got to the really good part. *pouts* you HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO HAVE TO continue this SOONNNN!!! update SOON!! it's pretty darn good. ^_^ i noticed a few grammatical errors...some misplaced/missing commas and stuff...but other than that, very good job! ^_^
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