| "The Slave Trade" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:02 CDT
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Wow, that rocked. great idea, and you have to update soon! It's really good so far, and I hope you keep going!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 00:07 CDT
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hey, this isn't Kikyo_Hater but her friend who cannot access her account - WolfBlade781 anyways.. this has to be one of the best stories (if you can call it that, its only 1 chapter long!) i have ever read. and thats a lot of stories!!! i BEG you to PLEASE update soon, 'cause i'll explode with anxiety of not knowing where this is going!!! if you need any help with writer's block, just e-mail me and i will help!!! but e-mail it to sdombi@adelphia.net until i get mine all worked out. THANX AND GOOD LUCK!!!!! ~TALA~
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the tops! i love this fic soooo much!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW THIS IS VERY SWEET
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Reviewed By: myrai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likey keep writing
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Reviewed By: La la la On: July 05, 2004 20:35 CDT
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good. please update
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 02:39 CDT
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This story is really interesting, I liked reading it. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: ditchertypepersonBUM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 00:23 CDT
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This is interesting, usually she's the slave. Though couldn't she take the shock collar off and still keep him without causing a riot? UPDATE SOON ~BUM~
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Reviewed By: chishio [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 00:02 CDT
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this story is good i hope you don't stop wrighting. keep up the good work x
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Reviewed By: Eiko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 23:39 CDT
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That was Great! i can't hardly wait for more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Eiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 23:39 CDT
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That was Great! i can't hardly wait for more ^_^
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Title: whats the point in titles???
Reviewed By: inuyasha loves me aint bothering to sign in On: July 03, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this is a great idea...wish i would have thought of it -crys- but you keep up the good work and up sate soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU IN ADVANCE...and i like the ending the best...^_^ the pervertedness...it is getting to me...is pervertedness a word? dont answer that...well you can if you want...btu anyway... UP DATE Kagome tati AKA InuYasha loves me...UP DATE...(up date!!!!!!) -shakes fist-
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Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is interesting! I added it into my favourite list. Keep on writing! And I agree with Redherring. Well, I look foward to seeing your update.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:15 CDT
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It's a really good story. I like the idea of the plot. However, I think it could do with a bit of elaboration. I know that you may think up parts of a story that are ahead of the point you're at, and you want to get there fast, but you have to remember to take your time. Drag things out enough to make them interesting, but not boring. The way the first chapter is written, it's like reading a text book. It's like: This happened; then this happened.... Spice it up a bit. You could also describe actions and facial expressions past what we essentially need to know. I can think up of several ways to drag out Kagome's interaction with Shippou, even.///////////////// Also, Sesshomaru was a bit OOC. AU characters are allowed to be OOC a bit, however only to an extent. The way Sesshomaur talks is at odds with the way you describe him and his actions./////////////// Anyway, the story needs work, but it has alot of potential.
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: July 03, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Just...wow. I usually don't read Inu/Kag stories (hardcore Sessh/Kag fan here!!), but your story is very interesting and keeps me wanting more. I like it alot so update soon!! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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