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Title: Is it really over? Does it have to be?
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 14:53 PDT
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Im sorry, i just avoided this story i guess...i knew it was coming to an end and i guess i just didnt want to read the last of it... to bad... maybe you could try doing some sequel of them as parents? But i really liked this fic, it was written very well! I cant wait til you write down your next idea for a fic so i can read it! Later
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Reviewed By: I'dBearMiroku'sChild! On: September 19, 2004 13:46 PDT
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so far awesome story!...but becareful...I've spottes two lines that have been on an Inuyasha episode before...you never know who might be reading your story..hehe...wellim off to finish reading the story...byebye
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Title: eeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reviewed By: Hieisdarkangel44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it it was funny sad and fluffy and and and oh yeah and hentiaed [perverted] all at the same time soooooo please mafe more like this and it only took me 1 hour to read this so make the next one you make longer caues this one was short if it only took me 1 hour toread this well mata ne [see ya]
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG....i can't believe it is over...*tear*...god that was one of the best fanfics i ever read...thats right up their with In a Different Light!!! I usually dont read inu and kag ones...mostly rin and sesshy ones but that was amazing....iam kinda sad its over/.....if u were to make a sequal about their children then i would most defintly read it!! -------------Jen
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: September 10, 2004 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you can't tell from the ratings, I have a VERY high opinion of this story! So much so that I plan to post a link for it on my website in my favorite stories section. And I'm very picky about what goes onto that list, lol! But I did enjoy this story a lot! I found it very original despite the wariness I first had do to the summary. It made the story sound a lot like the type of plot that has been rehashed too many times to count. I was very plesantly suprised, though, to find that it was nothing of the sort. Fluffy, romantic, dramatic, angsty...a little bit of everything rolled up into one very neatly written package. I was actually hard pressed to find mistakes in your story. ^_^ Everything flowed well, the dialogue was well written and believable, you brought across the emotions of all the characters brillantly...I suppose the only thing I could really find to be critical of in the end was that I found Inuyasha's...acceptance, or ease in which he fit into the modern world to be a little too smooth. He started sounding like a modern character a bit too quickly in the way he talked, and the way he reacted to a lot of things. Other than that, I found the story to be very well thought out and put together, and the twists and things that you did differently from what authors normally do played out so well! Like Inuyasha being afraid of having children, of not being able to hurt Kagome. They were all such good ideas, and so well executed! I really hope to see more work from you |
Reviewed By: ktakn On: September 08, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok. it took me three days to read it complete. but i'm glad that i finally finished it. ^^ lol. i must congratulate you. it was an excellent fic. even though i thought that the ending was to abrupt. i still think it was good. the kids were awesome. toga the best.. lol. i liked this fic very much and the epilogue was perfect.. i looove epilogues. ^^ congrats
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Reviewed By: Serenity2020 On: September 08, 2004 18:17 PDT
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Hey loved the stiry, i finished a few days ago, and it took me that long to read it. it was really a good story. When i first started reading it i was really tired and so after reading the first chap i was all emotional. no other story did that for me. i cant wait to read your other storys. It was one of the best ones i have read so far. lots of love from me :-)
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Title: sniffle...
Reviewed By: angelizzle On: September 05, 2004 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i just finished the whole story and i swear I've never felt more amazed! and happy than with any other fanfic ever! I like, CRIED once I read the last line of PURITY. wow... thank GOD I started reading this while you where in the midst of finishing up... in fact you probably just finished a few hours ago. I mean I'm used to reading the dirrty lemons but it was nice to get a little tender-loving moments you know? I really feel like you could NOT have done a better job than this!! Thanks also because I'm starting school soon and this kinda took my mind off the anxiety of it all. OK i can't write anymore 'cause I'll start crying... ok... nvm... BUT hey!! I'll send u an e-mail ASAP
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Title: nicely done....
Reviewed By: capnyossarian On: September 05, 2004 18:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice work.... your writing style is superb; i enjoyed every minute of this fic. i look forward to seeing your work in the future...
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Title: O_O WoW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nanner7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 10:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! I really felt like i was there watching it all happen, like i was pulled into Inuyasha and Kagome's life. I found my self feeling happy and sad when ever the characters were sad.I even cried at times.So Good Job.^_^ I just have one question? Why didnt you have a part in the story where Kagome meets Sango and Miroku's reincarnations? U hade her meet Koga's.that was the only thing i didnt like.it made me a little mad.But i guess i can forgive you. If you promise to write more stories, then I promise to read them, and to review them. So please keep up the excellent writting for me.PPPPLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE.^____^ ~~NANNER7~~~
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 31, 2004 17:41 PDT
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*Sniffle* Wow. It's really over. This was such a beautiful fanfic. It literally sent my emotions on a roller coaster ride and you always kept me wanting more. I'll miss coming online and checking for new chapters, I really will. Please put the new story up soon and I hope it's just as fantastic and breathtaking as this one was!!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: August 31, 2004 14:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Took me 3 days to read the whole thing...I LOVE IT! It was the perfect story. People keep writing these stories about Kagome and InuYasha ending up together and having kids, etc. But this was great. You didn't put too much drama or suspense...there was just enough to make it such an incredible story. I think I'm gonna start reading it all over again! LOL
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Title: Lemons
Reviewed By: Squalleon On: August 31, 2004 08:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that these may be some of the best written lemons I've ever read. Perhaps it is the way you tend to use more emotional description than clinical "what goes where, this does that" sort of thing. In any case, they are truly beautiful moments you've managed to capture. While every one of them remains separate, the levels of emotion seems to increase with each one, and whether this is accidental or purposely done, it is a masterpiece in a genre teeming with teenage hormones, PWP, and one shots that would be better termed as 'peep shows'. I think you've managed to capture the spirit of Takahashi Rumiko's characters in such a way that the artist herself should be proud. I rarely leave reviews on fanfics. I rarely find any worth leaving a review on. This one is outstanding, IMO. This one absolutely shines! Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story with us, and thanks for showing me that there are some writers out there who care enough to put out insightful, well-thought out stories that speak to the emotions without seeming over-the-top and way too dramatic. You've made me a fan for life! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: August 31, 2004 00:21 PDT
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wow this was a great story. Too bad I didn't find it before it ended or else I would of reviewed..alot..I loved this story and I hope that you keep up the great work. I will try and take a look at your other stories since I was so affected by this one. You are a very talented writer and should be very proud of yourself for coming up with something like this, Krystal.
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Title: =,(
Reviewed By: bethie On: August 30, 2004 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story is so fuckin beautiful lol its was just omg i wanted to cry so bad the ending was the shit of all ^_^ it was just how i hoped it would be and i love there children ^_^ there just as great as toga ^_^ but double the fun lol i wish u would of went it to a lil more detail about them thought,,, and u know what u had the same idea i have about there kids the only difference is that the sons i made wernt completly identical and the names were differt to of corse and i even made inuyasha have a daughter,,, but i called her Yume Hime Higurashi ^_^ (sence inuyasha doesent really have a last name) and the boys names are Kokoro and Kokuyo ^_^ kokuyo has black hair with silver woven through it and kokoro has silver with black woven through it & yume well she has her daddys hair with her mommys eyes ^_^u should see em i have them posted here ^_^ lol allrightty then thats it love it so so much Write more storys Bethie(lunar_storm)
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