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Title: Purity
Reviewed By: Cufflink95 On: December 12, 2004 23:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....I must say, I was rivitied to this story from the very beginning..........you gave interesting theories to a possible ending to the current story line. You kept the characters pretty much in thier true personalities and thats refreshing. You touched on the direction I think we all want to see the storyline take for its future....The raw scenes between InuYasha and Kagome were nicely not crudely written, not the usual smut as portrayed by so many that write fanfics, and obviously your mature enough to grasp the tenderness of the relationship and the act of love and wrote it as we would like to even feel emotion in our own lives.....bravo.please keep up the good work...........
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Title: Sigh...
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 14:09 PST
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I like it so far. Sigh... I wish I had these many reviews, but enough bout me... Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: NIssiCat On: November 27, 2004 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved this story, i finished awhile ago and omg it was great. i am currently trying to finish chronicles, and half way through torrent lol u really do write loooong story and i say the they are the best , u can get into detail. U are one of the best writers i have seen on here and i cant wait to read your new one but i gotta finish the 2 that i started first and that is becomming a project let me tell u...but i totly love your storys and u are just too funny too lol, U are just great lol didnt i say that already welll it not too much if it is true :-) lots of love and ::huggles:: keep up the good work
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Title: I give it a 10
Reviewed By: Beccajo On: November 22, 2004 16:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's another winner... i love the way you right! at first i didn't want to read it because the summary sounded like it was a Kikyo-Inu fic and i know there's nothing wrong with it i just perfer Kagome-Inu :) well any way it was great and i'm glad i listened to reviews and read it. Toga was ADORIBLE!!!>_< and so were all the other kids! i'm looking forward to reading metamorphsis but it might take me awhile....andi seem to switch from beccajo to kirara higurashi in mediaminer and fanficiton but i'm the same person and i always try to review
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 06:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wwwwaaaa why doesn't he understand that with him and Kagome that their children would be loved and never alone? her family would love them so would shippos WAAAAAAA must read more LadyOrion
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Title: *Applause*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 02:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say...I loved it. I want to especially thank you for the tastefullness of your "lemon" scenes. If it had gotten nasty, it would have lost the "sweetness" of their relationship and totally ruined the feel of the story. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: November 17, 2004 01:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is great i was crying with in the first 3 paragraphs WAAAAAAAAA ok on to ferverishly read the rest buhahhahahahh LadyOrion
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Reviewed By: heavenswings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I LOVE this fic. I also adore Toga. I am just a "little" bit scared of Dammit, she is really, really, creeping me out. Wonderful story though, definently original! ~*heavenswings*~
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Reviewed By: Sinister Butterfly On: November 11, 2004 21:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cute! A really enjoyable read. I love the little inu-pups. This also isn't wrought with the clichés that other Inuyasha fanfics fall into. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Guaja On: November 10, 2004 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! O_O This fanfic is excellent!! I hope you continue writting, you know how to mix love, fun, family...everything!! I even cry sometimes!! And, you dint forget the real story, i liked that! Maybe you can write other fanfic? Maybe seshommaru's life...or just something else!! ^_^ Guaja -- Venezuela
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Title: purity
Reviewed By: twidget On: November 04, 2004 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i like it a lot and im too lazy to think, but you lost me in the first three chapters. i was so confused, but you got me now. nice plot. its kinda different that the others ive read. im at school, do youll have to forgive my rushing. bye!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 19:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This so good I was in tears!
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Title: My opinion
Reviewed By: Raining Firefly Hotaru On: September 30, 2004 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finished your story, and I can't even begin to explain how much I absolutly loved it. I can hardly think of words to say. I, for one, am a romantic, but also very picky, proticurally when reading fanfiction. Spelling is something I don't look at as much, being horrible at it myself, but more towards the story and the writing itself. Yours was amazing, it proves the saying that a picture is worth a thousand word to be, in fact, very wrong. You painted your pictures vividly, and the words complemented the scenes wonderfully, which is something many amature writers forget. And now, my favorite part of the story: the story! I've read countless continuations of the series, and writen two myself, but was never really satisfied with the stories. Being so utterly obsessed with the series itself, I usually am a little too cridical if it doesn't seem like it goes along with the current plot. One of the reasons I loved this one so much is because the writing distracted me from anything of the sort. Only after I had to stop reading did I really think back and say to myself: Inu-Yasha's out of charactor, isn't he... It never bothered me in the leased. He kept his old personallity, just was more passionate which was needed for the story. He's so perfictly sweet! Once again, I simly adore it and have already read it twice, now. Keep writing! ^_^ Hotaru (15)
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: September 27, 2004 14:49 PDT
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hey, GREAT story! i loved it! please, you've got to write a sequel, or something. like maybe a story about how shipou and rin got together, or sessy and kagura did,somewhere on those lines. please?!
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 19:54 PDT
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good story!!!!! i realllllly liked it...beautifully written ^_^ keep up the good work! cant wait to read more of your stories!
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