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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 09, 2004 08:10 CST
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Take as long as you need, I'll still be here to review. I may be the only one saying this but, 'Remember school is more important then writing fan fiction.' Anyway . . . . loved the chapter, nice Seto is cute. It looks like they will be accepted seeing as Anzu is now out of the group, Honda already knows and Yami just needs to tell Yugi his feeling. . .Maybe at the same time Jou tells them about Seto? Might make it easier for them both. Till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:32 CST
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:10 CST
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yeah go yami. nice anzu bashing someone needed to put her in her place. i loved it. i really liked seto nice. i hope everyone excepts him and joey as a couple. im going to cry if they dont. please keep updating. and do it soon as well please.
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 16:39 CST
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>< Gay computer!!!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 08:50 CST
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I love yami, the way you wrote his coldness towards Anzu as he dumped her. Great! *is now an offical addict to this story* Thanks for writting this story. I'm enjoying it greatly.
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Reviewed By: KuraBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO I LOVE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE Update this as soon as possible! I cant wait till Bakura comes back into the story^^
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Title: Please Continue
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue can't wait till next chapter.
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Reviewed By: YugiBaby On: November 06, 2004 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Misoka Asagi (nli) On: November 04, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muahahaha PLEASE CONTINUE THE ANZU BASHING!!!!! In YOUR FACE QUEEN BITCH!!! I've had enough of your FUC***' 'Friendship talks! Uhh...Oh yeah great plot by the way. You did a wonderful job with your writing style. I like it! (Heheh You have to some how work in a scene where Anzu dies)
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Reviewed By: TenshiKikyo On: November 03, 2004 05:21 CST
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Cool fic please continue this
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Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*adds to favorites* WOW i really love this story!!! its soooOOOoo adorable, and god i hate anzu! grrr......plz update!!!i wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 14:47 CST
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computer is screwing up>
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 02, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're alive!!! *Huggle-Glomp* Soooo happy. ^.^ Ah yes, school. Eater of time, devourer of fun. It's ok if it will be a bit for the next chapter. Aaaww, Yami's realized his feelings for Yugi. Now if we could just get the Hikari to do the same. Jou told Honda about Seto? Honda didn't try to kill Jou for dating Seto (not because he's gay, but because it's Seto)? Very nice. And now Anzu plans on getting revenge on Yami somehow? HHhhhmmmm . . . . Can this be the part where Yugi runs out of the room and Yami follows after, not caring about begging forgiveness from Anzu? Well as long as Yami doesn't care about begging Anzu for forgiveness or doesn't try to get back together with her, it's all good. Until next update, have some plushies!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 20:25 CDT
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i really liked this. please update soon.
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: s.n.s On: September 17, 2004 20:58 CDT
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three things things... update, pudate and update. i wanna see kaiba not as a bad guy and malik (not his yami) and bokuras yami in the story pleeeeease theres also very little ryou inside !!! Where have my fav.characters gone to? please insert/put/edit (which ever you want) them in i like the story so far tho
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