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Title: Want more
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 06:26 CST
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YAY! Yami finally told Yugi he loved him. I'm so happy for them. Please update soon I want to see more. Also keep up the great work and hope to see you online. ~Yami and Yugi forever~ YAY! ^^
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Reviewed By: yuguiyugi On: January 31, 2005 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good i hope you finish it soon damn it. Bring htem togethier. already
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Title: y.a.17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz you have to write some more soon i can't wait till yami tells yugi how he fells about him and as fro jeoy and seto dude you have to do a lemon for those too very soon bye for now yamialex17
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Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH OMG poor poor Ryou.......of course im for Bakura FINDING his heart....and then they have hot hot sex.......And what is going on between Seto and Jou???i really wanna know about those two...they're sooooOoo cute :cuddles Seto plushie: And of COURSE Yami should tell Yugi.... but your the author, and you decide..... so PLZ update before i die of anticipation!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 08:52 CST
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They should admit how they feel and then fuck like bunnies, of course! YamixYugi lemon all the way! Poor little Ryou! I hope eventually Bakura will stop the abuse. Anyway, keep writing! I like this story, sad as it is with all the hikari abuse.
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Title: Yay update!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 28, 2004 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go confessions! More Lemon [graphic sex scene] goodness, Y/Y style! Or Seto/Jou style, as it would be sort of nice to see how those two are doing. But hey, you're the writer here, what you want goes. Also, I liked the whole Yugi in the shower bit. Little innocent Yugi masturbating for the first time. XD Sounds like the perfect time for Yami to come in and ravage him, with his permission of course. As always, good luck, and more Y/Y and S/J-ness! [Note: I'm not ignoring what's happening with B/R, but I get the feeling you have that all planed out and under control.]
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Reviewed By: YEHUDIS On: November 24, 2004 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT WAS COOL BUT WOW YUGI GETS IN TO A LOT OF TROUBLE RIGHT NEAR THAT ALLEY WAY DOESNT HE BUT AT LEAST HE HAS SOMEONE WELL I HOPE YOU CONTINUE ITS REALL LOVE TO READ THIS I JUST GOT INTO YU-GI-OH FANICSO YEAH
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Title: This is Great (re-write)
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to what happens next. I'm so gald that Yugi forgive Yami and their happy together. Anzu got what she deserve when Yami dumped her and she better keep her hands off Yugi if she doesn't want Yami to come after her make her pay. I hope Yugi tells Yami how he feel soon. Good luck Yugi and Yami. Keep up the good work and update soon. ^^
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Title: This is Great
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to what happens next. I'm so gald that Yugi forgive Yami and their happy together and Anzu got what she deserve when Yami dumped her and she better keep her hands off Yugi if she doen't Yami to come after her make her pay. I hope you tell Yami how he feel soon. Good luck Yugi and Yami. Keep up the good work and update soon. ^^
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 01:20 CST
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Really great chapters i liked them alot. Sooo who is ryou gonna end up with and will he tell yugi what happend? Oh and yay yami put anzu in her place she is such a bi***. I'm on the edge of my seat i gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: LittleHikari On: November 14, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Draza On: November 14, 2004 18:07 CST
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*cheers* go yami!!!!! I just started reading your fic today and i must say i'm lovin' it (do not own McDonald's) But there was one point in which i was confused...when did Yugi's friends (excluding yet including Anzu) find out that Yami was inside yugi (IN HIS MIND!!!)? I don't remember reading that. Anyhoo! Please keep writting!!! It's really good! ^.^v
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Reviewed By: Lil'Baby On: November 10, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, please continue
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 01:19 CST
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Hey ur doing such a great job and i really don't care how long u take as long as u update.I must say that the story is very well thought up and what not.THe plot is well done.Spelling is fine.The grammer is good except for when two ppl r talking to each other such as.:this is the wrong one:"hi yugi"said yami."hi Yami"replied Yugi. the right one:"hi Yugi"said Yami "hi Yami"said yugi the whole thing that i'm trying to show u is that when two ppl talk to each other and the one person is done saying something than it is the end of the paragraph. Plz don't dislike me for anything that i said i'm just trying to help is all and well hope that u update soon but take ur tie and good luck with ur school work.^_^ bye
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:49 CST
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