| "Dark Deceptions Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 23:33 CDT
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*sniffles* I hope you update this fic soon!
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Reviewed By: S..D. On: September 17, 2004 17:26 CDT
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I know that I have already reviewed your stories but please I beg of you please post more chapters. I have your previous chapters printed out to read when ever I want but the story is incomplete! Please post the rest! ;-) Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: Soldier of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 14:53 CDT
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Wow.. I actually like Relena in this story of yours... Thats an incredible feat considering I hate her guts and condemn her to all seven hells... anyways I love your story! You neeed to update sooon or... else... *shifty eyes*
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Reviewed By: jennie1799 On: August 11, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read some of the books and read your first draft. I like this revised version better than both. The depth of the characters and the complexity of the plot are awesome. Keep up the good work and I hope for an update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:08 CDT
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Monday I'm going to go look for her books, how'd ya feel about Anne Rice? *sniffles, searches virtual room for update then peeks underneath the bed and squeaks. Pouts for update*
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Reviewed By: S.D. On: July 31, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, hell I read the real books and they sure as hell ain't this good. Damn! Please continue!!! Thanks, Spirit Dragon
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Reviewed By: QuatreAngel On: July 27, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAAAAAAAAAAA! When are you gonna put part 10 up? *sniffle sniffle* I am really really loving this, and I wanna see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel1816 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad that the rating system only goes up to ten. This story deserves way more than that. For, the character's personalities are perfect, the plot is beyond words and I love the complexity to it. I also enjoy the wonderful love triangles that you have. I can't wait to see how they play out in the end. Okay, what I am really trying to say is that: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I liked the first version, but I LOVE this version. The interactions between the characters has become much more intense. I have a question, are Heero, Trowa, and Wufei actually seeing in color and experiencing emotions in small amounts, or am I just misreading things. Anyways please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Well, I knew it was a 1x2, but have complexities is always awesome. Glad that's totally cleared up however. Cause I might be more than 50% confused right now. But if your previous version was any indication to pairings in this version, well, yeah. So moo. Please write soon!! Very cool and fluffy and all. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Gundam Fan ^-^ On: July 17, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! HEH! You trapped Duo's personality really well. Well, my first time reading Yaoi, but I sure love to see Heero and Duo together! I love the fact that Heero is gealouse of anyone who dares to touch "his" Duo! And I'm glad that that witch Relena doesn't get to have him! Yep, guessed right. I hate relena. Anyway, please update this stoty soon, I can't wait for the ending! ^-^
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Title: I'm confused
Reviewed By: Java On: July 17, 2004 10:48 CDT
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Duo is Heero's superior right? Or have I missed something here?
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 03:59 CDT
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Okay this some parts of this chapter was confusing and I realise you are changing partners...I think, heh. Any way its good and you are right it has more depth to the story so keep it up but I will stop reading here. Many others love it so best of luck with the rest of this. I only read 1 x 2 stories. Shae-chan
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Title: I'm amused
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 23:36 CDT
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This vein of ficness is very good. Totally approved. Glad you kept the club scene as well. It's a good scene, and incredibly funny to boot. Now the Duo, Heero, Wufei dynamics are very interesting. Can't wait to see where you go with that one! Please continue soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lolly sister On: July 16, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this both times and this time it's better. Please don't pair Duo away from Heero, or Heero with Relena. I really hate 1XR fics.
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