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Reviewed By: colin22 On: February 22, 2005 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great so far with a new and unique approach which i like. The idea is definitly original which is good. I would like to know what happened to kagome at the last party becuase we see hurting more but don't know why. So please let me know and update soon I hate being left on the lurch. Anyways great job and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14nli On: January 23, 2005 08:56 CST
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Eep! Hope Inuyasha finds out soon... but at least she'll be back in S.J. tomorrow, right? Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Krazykilala On: January 07, 2005 12:17 CST
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ooOOOOO! I love this story, but I'd really wish Inu-chan would murder them all! Even her uncle, even the nice Italian guy, 'cus he knew about it! But it's for some reason sweet, with Kagome and Inuyasha. But other then that, kill the fucking guys!
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Reviewed By: Krazy_Kilala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 11:01 CST
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The uncle thing totally creeped me out. Now I won't let any member of my male family near me! ~lol~
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Reviewed By: firemaidenlovr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting plot. very much different to what I'm used to reading but that doesn't make it bad and while there are some parts that I can't see happening to Kagome you've really kept it to the plot. you haven't really gone off track, which is a good thing. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 20:09 CST
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This is a great story. Can't wait till you have it caught up to the other site. But I loved it anyways. Update when you can. Later.
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Reviewed By: xxxpeachesxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 21:59 CST
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Wow. I love your all of your work that I have read, and thought it was about time I tell you. I, in all honesty have read two other authors that are up to par with you. The only thing that I found "wrong" and it is not even wrong it is more of an I-am-not-sure-if-you-know-this-kinda-thing, People over in that side of the world introduce and everyth ing last name first and the -chans -sans etc. would be last name first i.e.Asakura Shinji would be Shinji, Asakura and Shinji-san (or what ever). I want to make it clear that THIS IS NOT A COMPLAINT, merely informing you incase you wanted to use it for future referance. And I am also sorry if you already know this, its just the way you introduced some of the seemingly Japanese men, it could have went either way. Thank you for your time and I can't wait for you next chapters. Arigatou Gosaimazu! TLP
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Reviewed By: Kagome14: Eeek! Don't look! I'm NLI!!! On: December 04, 2004 12:26 CST
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Ohmigosh.... *sob**sob**sob* Update soon... I rather want to see the men DIE!!!! Wow.... this was excellently written... I'm shaking!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:45 CST
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Really good. Hope you update with current chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 11:14 CST
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grrr... *can't speak because she's mad* update! i hope inu kicks all their asses.
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Reviewed By: nylsor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 17:57 CST
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please please please update. i can't believe her uncle did that to her. anyway update please.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 in a state of NLI-ness On: October 23, 2004 09:26 CDT
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Uh-oh. Not more hentais!!! *wail* I wish Inuyasha had been there, that man would sooo not have been able to do that to anyone again... *glare* Can you tell that I'm pissed? Yeah -.- Personal reasons >.>;;; Update soon sensei!
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Reviewed By: vmb On: October 17, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:12 CDT
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what up with that uncle and does it has to do with kagome please update
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Reviewed By: masterdemon On: October 11, 2004 14:57 CDT
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...* on knees* please don't take to long to update again...please!!!!
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