| "Torn" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo! Please don't leave it hanging like this!
|
Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 13:06 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
|
Reviewed By: Victoria Bollman On: August 23, 2005 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey you can't leave it like this. tell me theres more to come.
|
Reviewed By: Michael22 On: August 22, 2005 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Execellent story one of the best written ones yet but I'am on a limb here so so please just finish it so we can see what happens to Kagome and company.
|
Title: Please
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I'm shaking. please write more so there is an end... :sigh: I feel her helplessness, it is hard not to cry. You are a very good writer. you might want to look over some of the chapters for type-o's.
|
Reviewed By: Zackzman On: May 03, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i beg you.........update.......now........please
|
Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE WRITE AND UPUDATE MORE VERY VERY Ssooooooonnn. I can't take it if I have to wait I'M Gonna BURST. Oh And EXCELLENT JOB by the way.I LOVE it, it's great.
|
Reviewed By: wh00t On: May 03, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay update soon! ^^
|
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no *throws a pillow at you* no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no *throws a doll at you* no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no *throws a pop bottle at you* no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no *throws a kitchen sink at you :D* no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no! you left a cliffy and kagome was, was. oh your such a good writer, i just hate you for ending it though, what will Inuyasha do? did she even make it through the well? oh update NOW PLEEEEEAAASSSS, I BEG OF YOU i need to know. *sigh* i probably sound crazy. *finally throws a giant Inuyasha plushy at you* (now maybe you'll update faster, ne? Zirra
|
Reviewed By: Robbie23 On: May 03, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a great one that really keeps the reader wanting to continue reading. The plot is a bit dark maybe but is a good one. The fact that Kagome has gone along with the uncle is believeable because of her desire to help all people especially her family which she feels is what she's doing. Just maybe have kagome not lose her virginity to one of her uncles clients and to Inyuasha instead if your plan on having them end up together after this situation. Oh heh please update ASAP so we can find out on what you decide.
|
Title: Torn
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, please tell me that Shinji drugged her. That's why she didn't recognise Inu, isn't it. That's why her eyes were glazed. Ah, man, my heart is breaking for Kagome. When is she going to purify that ba#*ard. I keep rooting for her just to fry him. Come on, just one little spark right into the crotch of his pants so he'll never get sex of any kind again, and additional curses to his hands so if he raises them in violence to ANYONE, in any way, They'll FRY again. Come on, just a little taste of fixing his wagon. I'd like it so much, please?
|
Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update and write more soon I can't stand it I need to know what's going to happen next.Great JOB LOVE it
|
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh no poor kagome, i bet if inuyasha had looked he would have seen that she didn't want to be there, no what will everyone do, please update quickly, i can't wait i have to know what's going to happen, i really hope inuyasha realizes that he needs to help kagome, and realizes that he needs to help her soon. update PLEASE!!!!!!!! Zirra
|
Reviewed By: Michael11 On: April 21, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been over three months just wondering if your ever going to continue on with the story and let us know what happened to Kagome at the recent party or what ever.
|
Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story please write more & post soon. Youir doing a really good job so far.Keep up the good work.I just can't wait to read what happens next.
|
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
