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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 19:10 CDT
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Interesting. I was wondering why the story was called Torn. Now I know. So is Daisuke going to mollest her? It seems like it. I don't know I may be wrong but, I have gone years without seeing my uncles and cousins and they NEVER did that. That is crossing the line. Really crossing the line. keep up the good work. cools beans.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14... is scared of Kagome's uncle! Wheee... On: September 12, 2004 10:38 CDT
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Aaaack! Bad hentai uncle!! Bad!!! Please update soon, KawaiiChica-sama... please? *big eyes*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 01:45 CDT
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OMG OMG omg this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Gaudy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 11:11 CDT
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So I've been trying to read all your fics in the last few days and they are all awesome. I don't know which one to beg for. They are a few of the best I've read and I want more. *sniff* All the good stories are WIP. I do hope you finish them. :)
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Reviewed By: what happened? On: September 06, 2004 19:42 CDT
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where's the rest of it? please update soon!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 13:39 CDT
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what is her mother illness this is a great start pleaseupdate soon
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 09:59 CDT
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Nuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! You can't end it there!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: spumante On: July 28, 2004 22:56 CDT
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its really good so far cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 22:15 CDT
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ikes! She IS going to tell Inuyasha, it's she? What exactly is her mother sick with, or haven't you decided? Generally, I see Inuyasha as having a soft spot for mothers in general and Kagome's mother in particular. Were I writing it, he would probably understand taking care of a sick parent, at least a little. But that's your decision, of course. It's well written. I enjoyed it. :-D
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: July 22, 2004 10:01 CDT
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I am sooo glad this isn't another one of those stupid "Kagome's family suddenly becomes abusive even though they're the sweetest people on earth" thing. Um, I kinda missed it, was Kags adopted?
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Reviewed By: Inuyash_For_Ever (not logged in) On: July 21, 2004 21:47 CDT
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Great story, I guess Kags mom has a disease or something.....is Kag going to go to the past with Souta to try to tell everyone she needs more time at home? Do the Inu gang find out?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 19:09 CDT
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Wow... What a chapter. So her mom is dying? Only 5-6 months left? Is that why everything happened as it did? What can they do? What is Kagome going to do? Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 01:04 CDT
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Dang. What happened to them. I know of the mom and ojii-san being very loose with Kagome's travels. And since it seems that you are going to take that route but with something changing them, then that leads to question; what exactly happened to change their minds. I know my mom only slapped me when I cussed her out (long story). And she never did it hard enough to leave a mark. So they must be trying to protect her, but from what? What do they know or were threatned by to do that to her? Great start. Keep up the good work.
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Title: sounds intersting
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: July 19, 2004 12:56 CDT
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it sounds iteresdting. i'm looking forword to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Well, I can't say much about the story for now, but the beginning is pretty interesting. I'll look forward to the next chapter when the plot will begin to develop more. I just can't imagine what would make Kag's mom and grandpa hit her. Keep on writing!
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