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Reviewed By: xxxpeachesxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 21:59 CST
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Wow. I love your all of your work that I have read, and thought it was about time I tell you. I, in all honesty have read two other authors that are up to par with you. The only thing that I found "wrong" and it is not even wrong it is more of an I-am-not-sure-if-you-know-this-kinda-thing, People over in that side of the world introduce and everyth ing last name first and the -chans -sans etc. would be last name first i.e.Asakura Shinji would be Shinji, Asakura and Shinji-san (or what ever). I want to make it clear that THIS IS NOT A COMPLAINT, merely informing you incase you wanted to use it for future referance. And I am also sorry if you already know this, its just the way you introduced some of the seemingly Japanese men, it could have went either way. Thank you for your time and I can't wait for you next chapters. Arigatou Gosaimazu! TLP
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Reviewed By: Kagome14: Eeek! Don't look! I'm NLI!!! On: December 04, 2004 12:26 CST
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Ohmigosh.... *sob**sob**sob* Update soon... I rather want to see the men DIE!!!! Wow.... this was excellently written... I'm shaking!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:45 CST
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Really good. Hope you update with current chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 11:14 CST
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grrr... *can't speak because she's mad* update! i hope inu kicks all their asses.
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Reviewed By: nylsor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 17:57 CST
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please please please update. i can't believe her uncle did that to her. anyway update please.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 in a state of NLI-ness On: October 23, 2004 09:26 CDT
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Uh-oh. Not more hentais!!! *wail* I wish Inuyasha had been there, that man would sooo not have been able to do that to anyone again... *glare* Can you tell that I'm pissed? Yeah -.- Personal reasons >.>;;; Update soon sensei!
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Reviewed By: vmb On: October 17, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:12 CDT
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what up with that uncle and does it has to do with kagome please update
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Reviewed By: masterdemon On: October 11, 2004 14:57 CDT
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...* on knees* please don't take to long to update again...please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: October 10, 2004 10:14 CDT
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*sigh* That was so... romantic!! *high-pitched squeal* Arigato gozaimasu KawaiiChica-sensei!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 20:23 CDT
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: unnknnownnhd On: October 03, 2004 17:36 CDT
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...update or i will bother you until the end of time.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: October 03, 2004 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! What kind of illness does Kagome's mom have? Will Kagome be having trouble with her uncle?
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Reviewed By: boooooo On: September 17, 2004 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update please?!?!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This story is utterly amazing. You have me completely hooked! The story line is good, okay, I liked, it's absofuckinglutly amazing!!! Love it, the entire thing. I want there to be more chapters to read right now =( But yea, your writing is amazing. Why is the well sealed-- did I miss something? And Damnit Kagome, go see Inuyasha, hehe. Creepy Uncle,I don't like him so much. I hope Kag and Inu get back together real soon. Oouuu, maybe he can come live with Kagome?I hope so, that would be fun! Such a great story, I cannot emphasize that enough, hehe. Keep up the amazing work! Onto the favorites list this goes--- Til Next Time--- Aitu
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