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Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE WRITE AND UPUDATE MORE VERY VERY Ssooooooonnn. I can't take it if I have to wait I'M Gonna BURST. Oh And EXCELLENT JOB by the way.I LOVE it, it's great.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: May 03, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 15:53 CDT
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Reviewed By: Robbie23 On: May 03, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a great one that really keeps the reader wanting to continue reading. The plot is a bit dark maybe but is a good one. The fact that Kagome has gone along with the uncle is believeable because of her desire to help all people especially her family which she feels is what she's doing. Just maybe have kagome not lose her virginity to one of her uncles clients and to Inyuasha instead if your plan on having them end up together after this situation. Oh heh please update ASAP so we can find out on what you decide.
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Title: Torn
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, please, please tell me that Shinji drugged her. That's why she didn't recognise Inu, isn't it. That's why her eyes were glazed. Ah, man, my heart is breaking for Kagome. When is she going to purify that ba#*ard. I keep rooting for her just to fry him. Come on, just one little spark right into the crotch of his pants so he'll never get sex of any kind again, and additional curses to his hands so if he raises them in violence to ANYONE, in any way, They'll FRY again. Come on, just a little taste of fixing his wagon. I'd like it so much, please?
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Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update and write more soon I can't stand it I need to know what's going to happen next.Great JOB LOVE it
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 18:22 CDT
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oh no poor kagome, i bet if inuyasha had looked he would have seen that she didn't want to be there, no what will everyone do, please update quickly, i can't wait i have to know what's going to happen, i really hope inuyasha realizes that he needs to help kagome, and realizes that he needs to help her soon. update PLEASE!!!!!!!! Zirra
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Reviewed By: Michael11 On: April 21, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been over three months just wondering if your ever going to continue on with the story and let us know what happened to Kagome at the recent party or what ever.
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Title: Torn
Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story please write more & post soon. Youir doing a really good job so far.Keep up the good work.I just can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: colin22 On: February 22, 2005 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great so far with a new and unique approach which i like. The idea is definitly original which is good. I would like to know what happened to kagome at the last party becuase we see hurting more but don't know why. So please let me know and update soon I hate being left on the lurch. Anyways great job and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14nli On: January 23, 2005 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Eep! Hope Inuyasha finds out soon... but at least she'll be back in S.J. tomorrow, right? Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Krazykilala On: January 07, 2005 12:17 CST
Comment/Review:
ooOOOOO! I love this story, but I'd really wish Inu-chan would murder them all! Even her uncle, even the nice Italian guy, 'cus he knew about it! But it's for some reason sweet, with Kagome and Inuyasha. But other then that, kill the fucking guys!
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Reviewed By: Krazy_Kilala [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 11:01 CST
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The uncle thing totally creeped me out. Now I won't let any member of my male family near me! ~lol~
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Reviewed By: firemaidenlovr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting plot. very much different to what I'm used to reading but that doesn't make it bad and while there are some parts that I can't see happening to Kagome you've really kept it to the plot. you haven't really gone off track, which is a good thing. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 20:09 CST
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This is a great story. Can't wait till you have it caught up to the other site. But I loved it anyways. Update when you can. Later.
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