| "Closing the Case" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: February 08, 2005 22:33 CST
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Everything had to lead to something right? Well...Poor Inuyasha...the role model he looked up to....*sigh*...well, update soon ^_^
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Title: CREEEEEEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Vaoh On: January 23, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, I can't believe I haven't reviewed in such a long time, sorry. Anyway I loved the new chapter Naraku's a really sick SOB. All that stuff they found in his apartment and then just now finding out that he got someone to follow them around CREEEEEPY!!! Yumi: Shippo's right this dude needs some hobbies. Lady Vaoh: Might I say that Angel seems like someone my sister would like to 'oops' a few times just for being mean. I'm curious if Naraku is being held in police custody then why is the guy still snapping pictures. Oh well looks like I'll just have to wait to find out, maybe I missed something (it's entirely possible.) Anyway loved the new chappies and I hope you update soon. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now MM.org is won't let me review correctly.
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Reviewed By: ImmortalAngel143 On: January 22, 2005 01:28 CST
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Update soon..n try to fix this chapter...everything is all together
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Reviewed By: ImmortalAngel143 aka Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good as always lol...udpate soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 00:46 CST
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Hakudoushi makes my skin crawl. i know about him but i have yet to get to the episodes where he actually shows up. can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:10 CST
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Naraku is taking away someone special to them like he thinks they took from him. (i've watched too many detective shows and movies) if you ask me the guys compleatly loopy. made with greef. as much as i want him to go to jail or get the death penalty, if i were on his jurry i think i'd rule insanity. too bad they can't go back to his fiance's case and get the guy who did it. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: *Bows to you*
Reviewed By: LunaraDeNaraku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least people get to read your story here if not on "Sphere of Silence." I'm continuing to hang on your every word. Still loving it. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 20:23 CST
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hi again. been a while i know. been so bissy. now that i know Naraku's history i feel kind of sad for him. granted it doesn't excuse what he did but i feel sorry that kikyo's killer was never brought to justice. (this is ignoring the fact that i still hate both of them with a passion :/ ) are you going to go through the whole thing? the searching the putting together of everything and the court thing? i can't wait to read more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Best of luck
Reviewed By: Fyrloche - nsi On: December 13, 2004 06:57 CST
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I wish you the best of luck on your venture in to the world of publishing. This piece is very good and I can see it as a more complete novel. I hope that it turns out well. Just remember, if it doesn't go over well, don't get discouraged. Many great writers had early set backs. Stephen King even threw 'Firestarter' away because it didn't get published for a while! Just write from your soul and you will never be disappointed. Sincerely, Larry Nash, Jr. aka Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: ImmortalAngel143 On: December 11, 2004 02:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please update updaate update...n plz continue with story before publishing
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 00:18 CST
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Damn this story rocks!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 26, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update! another cliffie! congrats on turning it to an original piece. it really is that good with all your police facts and stuff... i will miss the IY characters, though, when that happens... *sniffles* oh, well, i'll get over it as long as i get to read the rest of the story, no matter who the chars are...
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: November 15, 2004 02:25 CST
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oh god plz update..u will finish this fic before u publish yes?
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Reviewed By: KillingBlade229 On: November 14, 2004 10:57 CST
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*shiff* *sniff* rin how could you,... just dont kill rin please dont kill rin. o well your story is really good i bet you $10 its naraku(monkey man) gtg update soon luv da story see ya!! KB229
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (still lazy, hey it's my day off!) On: November 12, 2004 10:52 CST
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alright i skimmed back over a couple of chapters and i figured it ouy: Kanna(miroku's kid)-dead. Just correctign my mistakes cuz i'm kinda obsessive compulsive.
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