| "Closing the Case" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 21:26 CDT
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I love you realism. How they fought and all. most people make everything between them semm so perfect... and fake. Don't get me wrong i still want them together but i like how everything seems real and like it could actually happen. Well enough of my babbling UPDATE... Again... Soon... PLEASE!
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Title: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooh nice twist a witness that's still alive and could possibly identify the man is not going to be good for him. However there is a slight chance she might die and there's a slight chacne she'll survive but he'll come back and kill her. Oooooooh all the different possibilities I can't wait to find out what's going to happen. As I said in my first review I love this story all the different twists and turns and possibilities are so exciting. Pretty please update soon I love this story and I'm waiting on the edge of my seat. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:02 CDT
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*crys*............ So... depressing... I'm actually very close to tears... Atleast she's still alive... *still crying*
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: September 23, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so gooooooood this is so shocking and cool keep updating plzzzz
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 02:54 CDT
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oh god. poor girl. i hope she's ok. who ever is doing this is really going to get it. poor girl. i feel like i'm watching and Inuyasha style Law and Order. SVU or something because of Kanna. though i have a feeling i've said this before. i can't wait to find out what happens. i hope she's ok. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 21:54 CDT
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oooo.... nice chapter! I hope Kanna STAYS alive! Looking forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: September 22, 2004 21:10 CDT
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POOOOOOOOOOR KANNA...:( SHE'S ALIVE AT LEAST, HOPE SHE SURVIVES. OK, GOTTA DO HOMEWORK NOW ^_^ UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 13, 2004 21:45 CDT
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Love this story! Update soon!
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story its so creavtive and so much like law and order (one of my fav shows) anyway I love it its exciting and has action and a little suspense. I loved the fact that shippo and Miroku have children that they can take care of. You have to update I have too read more. Sincerely your new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 00:49 CDT
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wow kouga's an ass. and i think that's all i have to say. ok so i also want to say how cute it was when Kagome fed Inuyasha a cookie cause he didn't have a "daddy pile" of his own. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Dude! I really like this! I just read through all of the chapters you have posted and you've got me hooked on the mystery. I also like how you've really kept your characters in line with how they are in the manga. Well, perhaps everyone seems to be how they are depicted in the anime except for Kagome...right now she seems a bit passive and inusubstantial...but it really makes sense given that she's just suffered a major loss. You can't expect her to be GI Jane from the get go, right? Sango has her strength, Miroku his charm, Inu his temper and yummy hotness (Inu is my fave!)...but I'm waiting for Kags to shine a little more other than as devoted, understanding girlfriend... But that's not even a criticism....more of an observation. I really am enjoying this even though there's some hideous criminal activity going on - anyone who hurts kids deserves nasty punishment...esp if sodomy is involved! Ok..nuff of the rant. :)
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 11:27 CDT
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intresting
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 09:40 CDT
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looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:51 CDT
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aww. i've never seen kanna put in such a cute atmospheare. poor Sango, even i was about to pumle that other ME. Miroku was bad to even think about keeping that sluts number. sorry it took me so long to up date. i just got back to school and was having the usual dorm internet problems. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: weirdonimo On: August 29, 2004 22:30 CDT
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noooooo~! nooooo! nonononononononono!!! Two more little girls mean two more victims! NOOOOOOO!!!
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