| "Closing the Case" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 09:03 CDT
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Awwww! Miroku and Kanna were just too cute. Don't tell me your going to kill her off!! And what about kirara? If you do anything to those little girls, this will officially be the most depressing story I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: August 23, 2004 02:17 CDT
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Awesome chapter. Very interesting how more develops each chapters... but none really have a huge smack in the face all at once. Just comes to you in bits and pieces. Yeah, I'm babbling :D Anyway, great work and good luck with the future chapters!
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Title: Noooo
Reviewed By: Kelle On: August 21, 2004 20:21 CDT
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No... not Kohaku too... waaa... THE MUDERER MUST BE GIVEN A SLOW AND TORTUROUS DEATH He had so much to live for... NO ONE WILL FIND THE BODY, YES, YES, THATS RIGHT Sango is all alone now... KILL KILL KILL KILL THE PERPATRATOR ...and that basically sums up my feelings as of chapter five. Excellent job :)
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 03:42 CDT
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oh no. whoever is doing this is going to really get when they're caught. i forgot that Sango and Kohaku's parents were still alive. and if they were already informed as Hojo said they were, would they not call Sango? can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: hsidevctm On: August 18, 2004 12:34 CDT
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OMFG!!! this is an awesome fic... i was stalling on reading it, cause i thought it sounded kinda dumb, but you have some MAJOR talent! PLEASE update soon! i only have to say 2 more things... A) wtf are you going to do to kohaku, and B) how the hell did you come up with a Miroku/Kanna pairing????? hahahahahahaha... that would actually work... hahahahaha... she shows no emotion, so he can grope her whenever he wants... hahahahaha... but i guess you probably did give her a soul -_- thats no fun -_- oh well! update soon!
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Title: sniff sniff
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 00:34 CDT
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wow this is a great story but it's soo sad my eyes were watering....cuz i have younger brothers myself and it opened my eyes well keep it up updte soon please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 03:23 CDT
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this is so good. can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: August 12, 2004 01:52 CDT
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Aww, that was a cute ending to that chapter. Awesome work. Can't wait to see your future works to this story. I wonder what happened to Kohaku. Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: August 11, 2004 22:18 CDT
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MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LMAO...HE HE HE
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (not logged in) On: August 11, 2004 19:29 CDT
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No not Kohaku too! I don't really like him much... but still! Love your new chappy.
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Reviewed By: ME On: August 08, 2004 15:53 CDT
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Another well-written chapter--another small piece of the puzzle.......need more ^_^ await your next update, ja!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 02:30 CDT
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this is really interesting. i have to admit i was a little worried about how you would be able to pull of a complex murdur plot but this is really sounding good. it's like watching Inuyasha and Law and Order all wrapped into one. can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith (nsi) On: August 04, 2004 01:08 CDT
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@_@ what's sodomise or what ever that was..anyways update plz
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: August 03, 2004 23:04 CDT
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All this in-depth stuff makes me seem like you are really a dectective. Anyway, really good chapter. Good luck and hope you update soon :D
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(nsi) On: August 03, 2004 20:19 CDT
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LOVE YOUR STORY! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! (We're all human...) Keep up the good work! Great plot too.
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