| "Closing the Case" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ibra-san On: May 18, 2008 12:42 CDT
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Poor Souta, Kohaku and Kanna. All three suffered through the worst experiences imaginable that no child should ever pass through. A wonderful Inu story, but I cried so hard. ;;
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Reviewed By: katyexmachina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites. I adore police dramas, and I felt you really did well with covering the more gruesome aspects without seeming overly grisly. Congrats! It's a wonderful fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:41 CST
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Chapter 20: What Kagome said was so sweet, and so... deep. I feel bad for Naraku, really. He shouldn't have had to go through what he went through.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 18:55 CST
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What does it mean to be 'sodomised'
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Reviewed By: kagomeserinity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 17:32 CDT
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I love this fanfic , it was just soo cool , you have to write another
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 20:23 CST
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I liked it! Sad and rather disturbing at times, but overall a very good story. It had it's cute parts as well as serious, which gave it a good balance. The only thing I found off was that after the big deal with Myouga, you didn't even bring him up as a witness or really explain much more about what went on with that. So the parts that featured him felt somehow pointless. Other than that, though, great job! I enjoyed it, and the suspense kept me on the edge of my seat, lol...
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Reviewed By: Lil'Frog On: July 12, 2005 19:48 CDT
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awesome fic its was so great you could have turned into a real book that people actually bye from bookstores. totally luved it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil'Frog On: July 12, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the rating things go from 1 being the highest to 10 being the lowest then my ratings neeed to be switched around. Well anywho that was a awesome fic. ^_^ Totally luv it you could have turned that into a real book. you know like people acually buy from a bokk store. you just needed someone to publish it and do all that book stuff it takes to write a book. Anyway I'm probably boring you. So like I said luved the story. You should right more like that. ^_^ bye
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: May 19, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a beautiful story. It was sad but also made me laugh at times. You are a great writer. I will have to read more of your stories. I enjoyed this story greatly.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Ty On: April 24, 2005 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great. at some parts it even made me want to cry you shoulda keep writing fanfics i can't wait till you write new ones, keep up the good work :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Kagome (nsi) On: April 15, 2005 21:37 CDT
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I loved this fanfiction... It was interesting, kept me wanting to read, kept you guessing, but had enough social interactions and emotions to make it a good mix. I think this chapter was my favorite...because...I don't know, it was just written in such a way that you just have smile and and be melancholily happy, even though its over.
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Reviewed By: WickedDani On: April 11, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it you are a great writer(better then me). Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: ImmortalAngel143 aka Step of Faith On: April 11, 2005 20:16 CDT
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Loved the story...plz keep this up a little while longer...I would like to copy it to my folder on my computer so I could read it again.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI) On: April 11, 2005 19:32 CDT
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That was beautiful. The whole story was absolutaly amazing. You caputured the heat of the moment and the life of a police officer perfectly. The misery of loving a man who you can't be with whenever you want and the grief of knowing you can't be with the woman you love every minute of the day because your job requires late hours and mountains of paper work. It was one of the most amazing stories i have ever have the pleasure of reading. Until next time. The journey was fun. I'll never forget it.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:38 CDT
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Haha! Can't believe Koga acctually said something that could be considered intellectual! So is this the end? I can't remember if you had an Author's Note at the end that said anything about it... sorry. Well if it is (which would be sad!) I think your story was one of THE best stories i've ever written. Especially AU. Rozefire is #1 you are #2. Which still means you are an amzing author. You should write a book. I'd so buy it, then hunt you down so you could autograph it. It was so realistic and i love the whole CSI/Law & Order vibe i got from it. I love those shows and they could make an episode with you plot!! (obviously it would have to have their charactor's and charactor's children not the IY gang)It would be awesome! Can't wait for your next story. If it's anything like this one it will be fantastic! ~Caitlin
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