| "Closing the Case" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: November 10, 2004 22:14 CST
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Very interesting chapter, but good nonetheless. I wonder how the man got the code word. Anyway, good luck with this being published.
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Reviewed By: Umi2583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome story. I love CSI, and you're one of my favorite authors ^_^so it's only natural this story has become one of my favorites! I hope you keep updating this story!
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Title: MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay great chapter I love it and I now understand why all of them have kids. Yumi: Kinda late don't ya think? Lady Vaoh: shut up no one asked you. Anyway why all the suspense (don't get me wrong I love it but why so much) thanks to you I'm pumped full of adrenalin at 1:00 in the morning and believe me late hours and adrenalin is never a good mix. Anyway once again loved the chapter, this story just keeps getting better and better and makes up for all those episodes of The District I've missed. Anyway there's no more kids for this guy to kill well not exactly but he doesn't know that Kanna's alive *lightning strikes in the backround* or does he MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Yumi: *whispering* don't let her blame that adrenalin rush on you she had a cup of hot chocolate with extra sugar, and a cup of coffee when she got home from school. Lady Vaoh: *glares at Yumi* Anyway I love it and I hope you update soon I have to know what happens next. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (wont let me login) On: October 22, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He-he i hope my reviewing with every chapter isn't annoying. I just love all your work and love praising you. Jeez Kilala too?! *suspiscious look* But will she live or die? well just update soon before her body gets cold! (I have no idea why i say half the things i say so feel free to ignore me if you want. Most people do.)
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 17, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaugghhh!! i knew it, i just knew kirara was next! great story, can't wait for the update...... but i guess i have to....
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Title: *is speechless*
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
............................... all i am able to say is...................... this story rocks! it only took me one and a half hours to read all ten chapters. keep up the really good work and plz update soon. shane.
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Title: WoW! OMG!
Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something seems a bit fishy with that phone call... like a certain letter... and certain words spoken by Shippo... though I could be wrong, but something definately seems suspicious about it. I like to think of myself as a stickler for details.... anyways I love murder mysteries, espically this one! Its really good, no holes anywhere -at lest not that I have seen yet- and it's got me hooked! Anyway I am so eager for the next chapter! ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 03:13 CDT
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oh no. this is getting really depressing. i hope Kirara is ok. and what happened to Max? didn't Shippo say he left him at home with Kirara? up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: yashamoru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a really good writer keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: October 15, 2004 01:15 CDT
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Aw, short chapter--but it's better than getting a long chapter out every couple of months. Awesome job... you keep leaving me with these cliffhangers that make me want to choke you. Hope you update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:40 CDT
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Got caught up after God knows how long. Terrific job. I'm really surprised how this is spanning out into a huge plot. Please write more soon. I'm definitely looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 04:47 CDT
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i would almost feel sorry for that lady if i didn't think she was so incredibally incopitant that she deserved everything that came to her. the stress coming off this story almost rivals the stress coming off my school work. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 21:26 CDT
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I love you realism. How they fought and all. most people make everything between them semm so perfect... and fake. Don't get me wrong i still want them together but i like how everything seems real and like it could actually happen. Well enough of my babbling UPDATE... Again... Soon... PLEASE!
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Title: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooh nice twist a witness that's still alive and could possibly identify the man is not going to be good for him. However there is a slight chance she might die and there's a slight chacne she'll survive but he'll come back and kill her. Oooooooh all the different possibilities I can't wait to find out what's going to happen. As I said in my first review I love this story all the different twists and turns and possibilities are so exciting. Pretty please update soon I love this story and I'm waiting on the edge of my seat. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:02 CDT
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*crys*............ So... depressing... I'm actually very close to tears... Atleast she's still alive... *still crying*
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