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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It'll be interesting to say the least to see what happens with Yusuke and Botan's mating. Hmm...you know I just had another thought about Yukina and Kuwabara's mating, if a Koroomie is rare, how much rarer would 1) a mated koroomie pair be and 2) a male kroomie (even one transformed from human to a half demon/human hybrid) would he have the tears turning to gems too? Wonder how many greedy guts out there would go after him or them? Heh, given that Koroomie are technically all female, does that mean he can get preggers too? *lol* wouldn't that give him a start, ne? I'm looking forward to Touya and Mouya's sidestory when it comes and Chu and Atsuko's - though I've been meaning to try a Yomi/Atsuko pairing - buwahahahaha! Anyway, excelent work, I look forward to more and finding out what happens next. There's quite a bit still going on. And gotta see the birth of the kids too! ^.^ Will there be any following sequels to this? It's a wonderful story 'verse' :)
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...so what happens if Botan's corpreal (physical) body gets taken from her? Better yet, if she mates with Yusuke, can it? Especially if she is pregnant? I do think Koenma isn't seeing clearly because of his father, but I think the guys are sort of selling him short because in the end, he did rebel against his father, he does have some spine. If he got wind of what his father was plotting, do you think he'd go against him again? If so That would give the guys a sure inside ally. ^.^V Hm...wonder what would happen to botan if she did mate with a demon seeing as she's sort of a psychopomp who guides souls to the other world. Wonder if she has an inherent ability to see the length of beings lives? Hey if Touya gets a mate, will Jin or Chu? How about Atsuko? :D
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Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story..can't wait for the next chappie ^.^V
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Reviewed By: Shadow_of_a_Kitsune_Thief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:36 CDT
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You suck! hahahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story. I hope you will continue it. It's great!! I'm putting it on my favorites list!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Thats all I can say. Every chapter was great. Please please continue, I wanna know what happens next with everyone, especially Yusuke and Botan, they gotta get together soon. Ohh and what kids the others have! So please please write some more!
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Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u really have no idea how much i love this story. i know it will be updated when you finish the next chapter, but if it will help u, i really look forward for the next one to be up.
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Title: One of My Favorites!
Reviewed By: kittycat831 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to admit that my rating is partially based on the fact that I'm an absolute fan of Kurama and Keiko fanfictions, but this is by far one of my favorites. The writing style is very good, nothing complicated, but also nothing too simple. I love the interactions between Kurama and Keiko. I can't wait for the rest of the story!
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Title: One of My Favorites!
Reviewed By: kittycat831 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll have to admit that my rating is partially based on the fact that I'm an absolute fan of Kurama and Keiko fanfictions, but this is by far one of my favorites. The writing style is very good, nothing complicated, but also nothing too simple. I love the interactions between Kurama and Keiko. I can't wait for the rest of the story!
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Title: ooooooooooooo
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo great chapter!!!!! update sooooon pleaseeeee *glomps authoress*
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Reviewed By: RiskDraka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all the story was very well writen and very different compard to many others, I like the detail in it alot, but you didn't go over board with detailm which many writers do. Or they does worse and do little detail. You did a great job on the X-Over as well, the mesh between the two was done very well. I can't wait till more is up!
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Title: I LOVE YOU!!!!!!
Reviewed By: RobotsInDisguise [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you've updated. I was starting to worry. I was hoping you haven't gone missing or died or anything like that. Thank Goodness! I love your story mainly because of the Kurama/Keiko-ness. Do you know how hard it is to find a decent Kurama/Keiko fanfic that's NC-17 and isn't on Fanfiction.net!!!???? It's really hard! It's damn near impossible! I'm so glad a person like you exists. I love you and I hope you will update often, especially Kuronue's Pendant. That story is HOT.
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Title: YAY! ^_^
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 07:34 CDT
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YAY! YOU UPDATED!!!! please do so again sooooooooooooon! lol lovedthe chapter btw lol anyways Ja ne! ~Sakuralovesli
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Title: -midnightdemon
Reviewed By: midnightdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 05:23 CDT
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i cant remember if i've reviewed this story before, but i really dont feel like going through all your reviews. and i seriously doubt you can get too many anyway. so.. i love this story, its been awhile sence youve updated. i hope you haven't given up on this one, i look forword two the next chpt.
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Reviewed By: SacredJune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 18:51 CDT
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Yeah! Awesome story can't wait to read what happens next.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen cant log in On: April 30, 2005 08:28 CDT
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this is very good, VERY good, i love the way you merged these two shows, very good work, i love it very much plz continue with it
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Reviewed By: morwen_re not logged in On: April 24, 2005 16:29 CDT
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i loved that chapter! i'm sorry to hear about all the bad stuff that's been going on, i know how that goes. i can't wait to see the next chapter of the story, as i was starting to wonder if you had quit on it. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:58 CDT
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yay, new chappie! Update again soon. Take as long as you need for the many things going on in your life, just try to get it done.
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Reviewed By: Treesha On: April 05, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove the story, it's so orignal and it all fits together! i hope you update soon! Thanks for posting this, it really is great! XD
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Title: The Mating
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 18:44 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Inuluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is really good! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: February 05, 2005 12:41 CST
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please up date again soon. i'm having withdrawal.
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Reviewed By: Pre Pre On: January 29, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it got my attench from the start.Great story line and everything hope you update soon .Oh and cannot wait for Toya and old' gel story .Keep up the good work and update soon
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy 2 sign in On: January 23, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH about time Chap 29 worked!. Good Job!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I LOVE this fic!!! Please update soon! I wanna read what Kurama 'n Keiko's kits look like. MSF
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 16, 2005 20:45 CST
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thanks for finally getting it up and online! no sarcasim ment, of course ^-^. i love this new chapter and the twist you just introduced was great! please update again soon, so i know if my hunch about what keio and kurama are going to do to help kagome are corect! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: virleene On: January 15, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this, but did you have to hook sesshoumaru up with rin? he's like a father figure to her. . The other pairings are just great, however. I especially like the hiei/shizuru pairing :) not that it would ever happen, but it's certainly hot. Actually, in all honesty, this story was going just fine - I don't see the point in throwing the IY characters in so late in the story - it looks kinda like you're putting them in there just to give them cameos...???
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:04 CST
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*celebrates* ^.^ The chapter's showing now... interesting. Inuyasha chracters seem to infiltrate your stories... but at convienient times. Hm... So I take it the humans descended from the villagers live in the west now, eh? Or perhaps... er, I dunno... please update as soon as you can, so we can find the rest of the puzzle pieces...
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:16 CST
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awesome fic where's chappie 29! well, it took me three days to read the first 28 chapters, but I'm still interested. try just uploading chapter 29 as chapter 30, it might just be eaiser.
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Title: wahhh!
Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 14, 2005 06:02 CST
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*morwen re crying* it didn't upload! and i really wanted to read it! oh well, it's not your fault mithryl. it's the baka computer's! all elelctronic devices are in rebellion! that must be it! lol, i hope you can soon download the next chapter. i really did want to read it.
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