| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 18:20 CST
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^^ Okay, I'm happy... Updates! *does the update dance* Sry I haven't reviewed sooner, I was a little... preoccupied. But oh well! *has really enjoyed the last two chapters* Yea! can't wait for the next one! In any of your stories!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:06 CST
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Alrite, it took me almost three days to finish reading this whole thing, but i finished! I have to complain about one thing though. As a true Shizuru fan, i have to say that you have made the whole relationship between her and Hiei kind of one sided. Hiei courts her, Hiei mates with her, Hiei comforts her, and now, Hiei is using his strength to cover her pain. I think you should make Shizuru slightly more affectionate with him. I mean, i realize that she IS turning demon for him, but he's doing just about EVERYTHING else. Other than that, ITS REALLY GREAT!!! ^^ please dont think im whining or anything, just a little constructive criticism!! Update soon! I'll review again for sure! ~aliya
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:44 CST
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I love this story update soon and do a chapter with Moya and Touya. They are such a cute couple
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: November 28, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent 11 hours reading this from start to finish.. WTF was it really that long.. Dame.... All i can say is I want my 11 hours of my life back!!! No not really... Great Job
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Title: COOLIE!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 11:38 CST
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COOLIE!!!! THE TRANSFORMATION IS DONE!!!!! i really hate waiting for this story to be updated its tooooo goood and addictive!!!! lol please update soon! luv sakuralovesli
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:47 CST
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Hmm... intersting developments. So, is it just me or is everyone getting paired up? No offense, but it's starting to scare me... Oh well, I still like your fic... after all, who wouldn't?
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Reviewed By: LadyDais On: November 18, 2004 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all this is a wonderful fic, it has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I only wish my fanfiction was as good as yours. Keep up the good writing and thank you for that wonderful review you left me on Adultfanfiction.net. I hope Touya and Moya end up together. Ja ne! And always enjoy your writing.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 17, 2004 17:50 CST
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cool, you like cholate chip cookie dough too? i love that flavor! here's some for you, though. i'll be nice and share, especially if you update again soon like you did last time. ja ne for now!
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Reviewed By: -midnightdemon On: November 14, 2004 19:28 CST
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you know,.. i really do love this story. and its really odd, because before i got online i was wandering when you were going to update. then i got on and i saw that you did. not that i'm complaining.
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Title: AWWWWWWWWWWWW
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli(not signed in) On: November 13, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update sooooooon!!!!!!!! JA NE!~ luv sakuralovesli
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 09, 2004 06:44 CST
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yep, yep! you difinitly get the cookies and the lolipop! great job! and if you update agian soon, i'll give you the ice cream you wanted if you tell me what flavor. ja ne for now!
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Title: AWWWWWWWWWWWW
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE THIS FIC ITS TAKENME ABOUT 3 DAYS TO READ IT BECASUE I HAD TO KEEP ON STOPPING AND THINGS!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!! LUV SAKURALOVESLI!!!!
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Reviewed By: Morro On: October 27, 2004 01:20 CDT
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Hey, I started reading this a little while ago- not to sound mean, i don't know exactly why i did, since i'm not really one to enjoy lemons and limes and such- i'm one more for the fluff ^_^- though i do see the importance of such things at certain times.To be honnest, i think you could have done better with less lemons to get the story- but the plot you are giving so far has kept my interest. It's just my oppinon! But i am still reading it to find out where you plan to lead us! Fluff stuff is good- it can get the readers to realy want the lemons (i suppose) cus your never quite sure when the relationship will do that sudden kick off- like with what your doing so far with Yusuke and Boton so far- i prefur that better personaly. Awaiting your next update with interest ^_^ -Morro
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Reviewed By: Brollysan On: October 24, 2004 10:50 CDT
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Man, off of what i've read i wish you owned yu yu. cause this is just awesome i can't wait till you update so i can keep reading. this storry beats all the reagular adventures.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 21:59 CDT
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*blushes* Ok... this makes me wonder about my moral standrads... *nervous laughter* You kept Yukina in character throughout the whole chapter... and lemon... I never visualized that before... as in... Yukina... she always seems the innocent... heh... Oh well, I wonder what everyone else's reactions will be... especially since Kuwabara is still in school... and if Yukina gets pregnant, he will want to support her, so yes, great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: October 15, 2004 06:37 CDT
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hey, i loved the new twist! hurry up and update again soon! please!? i'll give you another lollipop if you do! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Mehi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 22:33 CDT
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This is an amazing story. I really love it. Please write more. It is really good. I mean very good. It is just amazing.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: October 11, 2004 18:29 CDT
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hey, me again. just want to tell you to keep going. i really like how this is going! please you've got to updating again soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Reiya Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 12:25 CDT
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I love it oh I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Cool story! I'm throughly enjoying it... Though Everytime I think of Yuuske's Demonic form, I start laughing... lol. Keep up the excellent chapters! This is a great story, and I like the Hiei/Shizuru pairing, it's the first time I've seen it!
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Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 22:20 CDT
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I love this! It's awesome! update before I send rabid squirrels after your ass!!! o.o
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: August 19, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutly loved it! your welcome for the lollipop and i hope you keep up the good work! please write more soon and frequently! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Zillah On: August 17, 2004 15:27 CDT
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this is a great story so far!! I hope that you continue it soon!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: August 13, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! i loved it! please update soon! if you do, you'll get a lollipop!
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 13:02 CDT
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NO FAIR! I WANT A RING LIKE KEIKO'S!!!!!^____^
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Thanks for fixing the problem. Please update soon! I WANNA READ MORE!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Keiko/Kurama story i have read! Keep up the good work! Just one problem, each time a new paragraph begins the first one or two words are cut out. please try to fix this, because it is extremely annoying.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 16:50 CDT
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This is awsome! can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nakira [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:28 CDT
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I hate Keiko but I love Kurama. Let Shiori walk in on them while Youko Kurama is there. Shuuichi won't have anything really to explain except where he was when Youko and Keiko were doing it on his bed.
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 23, 2004 09:46 CDT
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Awesome! Please update soon! I love Kurama/Keiko pairings, but you don't see them that often! That pisses me off! Oh well. What's with Kurama's mom? I would've thought that she would've heard that last display of affection. And, how come you didn't call Kurama's demon side Youko? They're supposed to be two souls in one body, right? Oh well. It's your story. I hope you update soon!
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