| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pre Pre On: January 29, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it got my attench from the start.Great story line and everything hope you update soon .Oh and cannot wait for Toya and old' gel story .Keep up the good work and update soon
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy 2 sign in On: January 23, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH about time Chap 29 worked!. Good Job!
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I LOVE this fic!!! Please update soon! I wanna read what Kurama 'n Keiko's kits look like. MSF
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 16, 2005 20:45 CST
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thanks for finally getting it up and online! no sarcasim ment, of course ^-^. i love this new chapter and the twist you just introduced was great! please update again soon, so i know if my hunch about what keio and kurama are going to do to help kagome are corect! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: virleene On: January 15, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this, but did you have to hook sesshoumaru up with rin? he's like a father figure to her. . The other pairings are just great, however. I especially like the hiei/shizuru pairing :) not that it would ever happen, but it's certainly hot. Actually, in all honesty, this story was going just fine - I don't see the point in throwing the IY characters in so late in the story - it looks kinda like you're putting them in there just to give them cameos...???
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:04 CST
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*celebrates* ^.^ The chapter's showing now... interesting. Inuyasha chracters seem to infiltrate your stories... but at convienient times. Hm... So I take it the humans descended from the villagers live in the west now, eh? Or perhaps... er, I dunno... please update as soon as you can, so we can find the rest of the puzzle pieces...
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:16 CST
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awesome fic where's chappie 29! well, it took me three days to read the first 28 chapters, but I'm still interested. try just uploading chapter 29 as chapter 30, it might just be eaiser.
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Title: wahhh!
Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 14, 2005 06:02 CST
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*morwen re crying* it didn't upload! and i really wanted to read it! oh well, it's not your fault mithryl. it's the baka computer's! all elelctronic devices are in rebellion! that must be it! lol, i hope you can soon download the next chapter. i really did want to read it.
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Title: still not working!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli(not signed in) On: January 14, 2005 05:21 CST
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WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! T_T its still not showing! whats wrong with it? i may beable to help. email me at saber_hiwarati@hotmail.com or neko_jin_saber@hotmail.comkk ok well if you need help you now kno my emails! so i may be able to help you if not then my dad can cause he works for computer people who fix computers and programs and things i wasnt really listening when he said what the title of his job was but i kno what they do ^_^U lol anyways im gonna go now beofre i get cause by my teacher for not doing work! JA NE! luv sakuralovesli
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Title: Bad news
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy to sign in On: January 13, 2005 22:08 CST
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Chapter 29 didn't upload right. All it says is "The Mating"
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: January 13, 2005 15:22 CST
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Errr maybe i should signup... can i edit then?? Anyway Typo on lat one. Should be Cool to see the Keiko has NOT let her powers ...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 21:09 CST
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*has pretty much died and is currently being looked at by a friend who poofed in out of thin air and is wondering how that happened...* But that's not the point! The new chapter! NNOOOOOOO!!!!!! It's not showing! It's not showing! *dies again* *revived* Anyways, I just thought(once I got over my hysterical response) to inform you that your chapter is MIA.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: January 12, 2005 20:41 CST
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AHHHHHH where is chapter 29!!!!! I't a bit early to say without reading chapter 29 becuse it's content consists of "The Maiting" but it's cool to see that Keiko has let her power both physical and political go to her head. Yet.
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Title: umm problem!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli (not signed in) On: January 12, 2005 13:01 CST
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the chapter wont show so i cant see it!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! oh and i forgot ot review for the last chapter so coolie chapter for the last one!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 12, 2005 06:15 CST
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um.... you do know that the chapter didn't load right, right? either that or my computer is being extremly werid, which it might be. in which case, i'm sorry i put this up, but just in case it isn't, i'm putting it up anyway.
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