"The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: August 13, 2004 20:10 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great fic! i loved it! please update soon! if you do, you'll get a lollipop!
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 13:02 CDT Comment/Review: NO FAIR! I WANT A RING LIKE KEIKO'S!!!!!^____^
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:41 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! Thanks for fixing the problem. Please update soon! I WANNA READ MORE!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 10:55 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the best Keiko/Kurama story i have read! Keep up the good work! Just one problem, each time a new paragraph begins the first one or two words are cut out. please try to fix this, because it is extremely annoying.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 16:50 CDT Comment/Review: This is awsome! can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nakira [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:28 CDT Comment/Review: I hate Keiko but I love Kurama. Let Shiori walk in on them while Youko Kurama is there. Shuuichi won't have anything really to explain except where he was when Youko and Keiko were doing it on his bed.
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Reviewed By: sesshyluvr On: July 23, 2004 09:46 CDT Comment/Review: Awesome! Please update soon! I love Kurama/Keiko pairings, but you don't see them that often! That pisses me off! Oh well. What's with Kurama's mom? I would've thought that she would've heard that last display of affection. And, how come you didn't call Kurama's demon side Youko? They're supposed to be two souls in one body, right? Oh well. It's your story. I hope you update soon!
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