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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 07, 2004 20:56 CST
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i know this sounds like i'm whining, but i really want to see the next chapter! please? what happens when the rest of the gang see keiko? i want to know!
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: axelalx On: December 07, 2004 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE. you have written a fanfic that is one of the most origanal I have ever seen
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Title: Blade99507
Reviewed By: Blade99507 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! steps up tp a platform ladies and gentlemen i am very honored to give this fanfic the first prize fic of the year. ( crowd goes wild) I'd like to say "more more more more" please update soon and i would also like to know how many kits full demon or not full demon.
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Reviewed By: A Critic, sort of... On: December 04, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I'm liking it, but I have some constructive criticism. Okay, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but please use spell chek! There's some akward dialogue and phrasing, but nothing too bad. Also, I'm with Rabidfangirl101; everyone's pairing up very suddenly. Kind of odd, but I don't mind that much. Other than a few technical problems, it's a great story. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitzune 71 On: December 02, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Kitzune71
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 01, 2004 17:54 CST
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glad you liked the ice cream! i like these last two chapters, even if i had to wait a *long time* to read it. lol. will you please update again soon? and how many kits is keiko going to have, by the way? are they going to be hanyou or full yoki? i want to know!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 01, 2004 17:53 CST
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glad you liked the ice cream! i like these last two chapters, even if i had to wait a *long time* to read it. lol. will you please update again soon? and how many kits is keiko going to have, by the way? are they going to be hanyou or full yoki? i want to know!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 18:20 CST
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^^ Okay, I'm happy... Updates! *does the update dance* Sry I haven't reviewed sooner, I was a little... preoccupied. But oh well! *has really enjoyed the last two chapters* Yea! can't wait for the next one! In any of your stories!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:06 CST
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Alrite, it took me almost three days to finish reading this whole thing, but i finished! I have to complain about one thing though. As a true Shizuru fan, i have to say that you have made the whole relationship between her and Hiei kind of one sided. Hiei courts her, Hiei mates with her, Hiei comforts her, and now, Hiei is using his strength to cover her pain. I think you should make Shizuru slightly more affectionate with him. I mean, i realize that she IS turning demon for him, but he's doing just about EVERYTHING else. Other than that, ITS REALLY GREAT!!! ^^ please dont think im whining or anything, just a little constructive criticism!! Update soon! I'll review again for sure! ~aliya
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:44 CST
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I love this story update soon and do a chapter with Moya and Touya. They are such a cute couple
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: November 28, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent 11 hours reading this from start to finish.. WTF was it really that long.. Dame.... All i can say is I want my 11 hours of my life back!!! No not really... Great Job
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Title: COOLIE!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 11:38 CST
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COOLIE!!!! THE TRANSFORMATION IS DONE!!!!! i really hate waiting for this story to be updated its tooooo goood and addictive!!!! lol please update soon! luv sakuralovesli
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:47 CST
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Hmm... intersting developments. So, is it just me or is everyone getting paired up? No offense, but it's starting to scare me... Oh well, I still like your fic... after all, who wouldn't?
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Reviewed By: LadyDais On: November 18, 2004 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all this is a wonderful fic, it has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I only wish my fanfiction was as good as yours. Keep up the good writing and thank you for that wonderful review you left me on Adultfanfiction.net. I hope Touya and Moya end up together. Ja ne! And always enjoy your writing.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 17, 2004 17:50 CST
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cool, you like cholate chip cookie dough too? i love that flavor! here's some for you, though. i'll be nice and share, especially if you update again soon like you did last time. ja ne for now!
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