| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Title: still not working!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli(not signed in) On: January 14, 2005 05:21 CST
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WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! T_T its still not showing! whats wrong with it? i may beable to help. email me at saber_hiwarati@hotmail.com or neko_jin_saber@hotmail.comkk ok well if you need help you now kno my emails! so i may be able to help you if not then my dad can cause he works for computer people who fix computers and programs and things i wasnt really listening when he said what the title of his job was but i kno what they do ^_^U lol anyways im gonna go now beofre i get cause by my teacher for not doing work! JA NE! luv sakuralovesli
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Title: Bad news
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy to sign in On: January 13, 2005 22:08 CST
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Chapter 29 didn't upload right. All it says is "The Mating"
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: January 13, 2005 15:22 CST
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Errr maybe i should signup... can i edit then?? Anyway Typo on lat one. Should be Cool to see the Keiko has NOT let her powers ...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 21:09 CST
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*has pretty much died and is currently being looked at by a friend who poofed in out of thin air and is wondering how that happened...* But that's not the point! The new chapter! NNOOOOOOO!!!!!! It's not showing! It's not showing! *dies again* *revived* Anyways, I just thought(once I got over my hysterical response) to inform you that your chapter is MIA.
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: January 12, 2005 20:41 CST
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AHHHHHH where is chapter 29!!!!! I't a bit early to say without reading chapter 29 becuse it's content consists of "The Maiting" but it's cool to see that Keiko has let her power both physical and political go to her head. Yet.
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Title: umm problem!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli (not signed in) On: January 12, 2005 13:01 CST
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the chapter wont show so i cant see it!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! oh and i forgot ot review for the last chapter so coolie chapter for the last one!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 12, 2005 06:15 CST
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um.... you do know that the chapter didn't load right, right? either that or my computer is being extremly werid, which it might be. in which case, i'm sorry i put this up, but just in case it isn't, i'm putting it up anyway.
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Title: Updates
Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 16:14 CST
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I was informed of two new chapters to your story but when i went to check i was sent to the fanfic selection page. Please fix this error so i many continue reading the story... by the way you're a great author (not joking).
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 11, 2005 06:37 CST
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nice one. i liked the last chapter. are yuske and botan an item yet,or are they just figuring things out for now? either way is okay, i'm just not sure if i missed something from a previous chapter or not. please update again soon! i love your works and they leave me on the edge of my seat.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:50 CST
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XD Fire-proof room... LOL. I find that amusing, quite so actually. Another great chapter! Heh, I say that alot don't I... Anyways! hopefully this review will be posted... and I still have to re-submit a review for 'Kuronue's Pendant'. When you were mentioning how long Kurama and Hiei were considering Shizuru and Keiko, it seems to lose the flow of your story...but that's probably just me. Other than that.. I enjoyed this chapter! ^.^
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 15:32 CST
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im kind of in a hurry, but i just wanted to say that these last two chapters were pretty good. i wasnt disappointed. Update again soon and i hope your arent suffering writer's block like i am at the moment.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 21:08 CST
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Glad to be supportive! So... hmm... *is trying to imagine a short Shizuru* hmm... Ugh. My brain won't produce an image! Dumb Brain... sigh. So, now that Everyone is pretty much through with the transformations, I have one question, just exactly how far are you in the series? 'Cause there is something that is not making sense to me... but that's just me... Where's Enki?
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Title: awww why do ya always have to stop it on da good parts!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:03 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! i know its sounds really sad but every weekend i always jump for joy whenever i see your fichas been updated!!! it the best part of my weekend! sooooo please update soon!!!!! or should i say next saturday! JA NE!!!! Luv Sakuralovesli
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: December 11, 2004 19:55 CST
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Yea! update! few things. 1) again nice job 2) whats with the bold text?. lastely there are a few really good long stories on this site. Sadly more are now dead or update like once a year. I just like how your updates are almost planable it their fequency(sp?) Keep up the schedual to the best of you ability i'd love to see at least one of these things finished.
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Reviewed By: Nakira [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen Hiei care for anyone that much, except Kurama...but that's another fic for another time! This is so good. I've read all the chapters you have so far and I wish you would update some more! This is a really good fanfic!!
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