| "The Mating" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Title: Updates
Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 16:14 CST
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I was informed of two new chapters to your story but when i went to check i was sent to the fanfic selection page. Please fix this error so i many continue reading the story... by the way you're a great author (not joking).
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: January 11, 2005 06:37 CST
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nice one. i liked the last chapter. are yuske and botan an item yet,or are they just figuring things out for now? either way is okay, i'm just not sure if i missed something from a previous chapter or not. please update again soon! i love your works and they leave me on the edge of my seat.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:50 CST
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XD Fire-proof room... LOL. I find that amusing, quite so actually. Another great chapter! Heh, I say that alot don't I... Anyways! hopefully this review will be posted... and I still have to re-submit a review for 'Kuronue's Pendant'. When you were mentioning how long Kurama and Hiei were considering Shizuru and Keiko, it seems to lose the flow of your story...but that's probably just me. Other than that.. I enjoyed this chapter! ^.^
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 15:32 CST
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im kind of in a hurry, but i just wanted to say that these last two chapters were pretty good. i wasnt disappointed. Update again soon and i hope your arent suffering writer's block like i am at the moment.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 21:08 CST
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Glad to be supportive! So... hmm... *is trying to imagine a short Shizuru* hmm... Ugh. My brain won't produce an image! Dumb Brain... sigh. So, now that Everyone is pretty much through with the transformations, I have one question, just exactly how far are you in the series? 'Cause there is something that is not making sense to me... but that's just me... Where's Enki?
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Title: awww why do ya always have to stop it on da good parts!
Reviewed By: sakuralovesli [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 22:03 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC! i know its sounds really sad but every weekend i always jump for joy whenever i see your fichas been updated!!! it the best part of my weekend! sooooo please update soon!!!!! or should i say next saturday! JA NE!!!! Luv Sakuralovesli
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 On: December 11, 2004 19:55 CST
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Yea! update! few things. 1) again nice job 2) whats with the bold text?. lastely there are a few really good long stories on this site. Sadly more are now dead or update like once a year. I just like how your updates are almost planable it their fequency(sp?) Keep up the schedual to the best of you ability i'd love to see at least one of these things finished.
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Reviewed By: Nakira [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen Hiei care for anyone that much, except Kurama...but that's another fic for another time! This is so good. I've read all the chapters you have so far and I wish you would update some more! This is a really good fanfic!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 07, 2004 20:56 CST
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i know this sounds like i'm whining, but i really want to see the next chapter! please? what happens when the rest of the gang see keiko? i want to know!
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: axelalx On: December 07, 2004 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE. you have written a fanfic that is one of the most origanal I have ever seen
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Title: Blade99507
Reviewed By: Blade99507 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! steps up tp a platform ladies and gentlemen i am very honored to give this fanfic the first prize fic of the year. ( crowd goes wild) I'd like to say "more more more more" please update soon and i would also like to know how many kits full demon or not full demon.
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Reviewed By: A Critic, sort of... On: December 04, 2004 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic! I'm liking it, but I have some constructive criticism. Okay, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but please use spell chek! There's some akward dialogue and phrasing, but nothing too bad. Also, I'm with Rabidfangirl101; everyone's pairing up very suddenly. Kind of odd, but I don't mind that much. Other than a few technical problems, it's a great story. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitzune 71 On: December 02, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Kitzune71
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 01, 2004 17:54 CST
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glad you liked the ice cream! i like these last two chapters, even if i had to wait a *long time* to read it. lol. will you please update again soon? and how many kits is keiko going to have, by the way? are they going to be hanyou or full yoki? i want to know!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: December 01, 2004 17:53 CST
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glad you liked the ice cream! i like these last two chapters, even if i had to wait a *long time* to read it. lol. will you please update again soon? and how many kits is keiko going to have, by the way? are they going to be hanyou or full yoki? i want to know!!!!!!!!!!
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