| "Roommates" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 23:44 CDT
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I love your story and one question what country do you live in? I got fasinated when you said I'm not English or American. So yep UPDATE PLEASE!^_^
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 06:24 CDT
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I was rereading this story [while waiting for a new update....] and chapter 3 reminded me....the little fox kid is Shippo, I'm guessing. Here's to hoping that Shippo will come back, poor little guy!! Sounds like he's in bad need of rescue. ^_^ YOu keep up the good work, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Title: Please finish
Reviewed By: sweet54 On: September 16, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this story. This is the first AU fic that I like, so please continue with it.
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: September 12, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea you updated!!! Ilove the new chapter its very very good!! They finally kissed!! Im so happy.lol I dont think your grammer is bad lol...compared to my story 'My Own Pet' your grammers its really good!! You must take alot of time to write your chapters unlike me im always in a rush!! Neways i loved your new chapter so please UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
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Reviewed By: TLM On: September 10, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, this is a great story and is very well written I don't understand why the people give it less than a 10. Hope you feel better soon and i hope you update soon too. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:49 CDT
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^.^ LUVED IT!!! My fave part was the very end!!! Hope you feel better soon! Keep writing! You're great!!!
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Title: need more
Reviewed By: bloomlvrchick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story I saw the person writing your story. I thought it was you putting it on there with another name. still the story is good and I think you should write more. too bad you can't put a lock on this so no one can copy write it.
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo On: September 08, 2004 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I am sorry that you are sick. I hope you get better soon. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: September 07, 2004 20:32 CDT
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=D yeay a kiss!!! i love inu kouga fights too...i think jealous inu is sexy lol great chapter and i'm sry ur sick. feel better soon!!
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Reviewed By: candygirl On: September 07, 2004 20:28 CDT
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WOW!!! i love this story it keeps me guessing with how many times u change it around but at the same time u know what is gonna happen neways love it!!!! Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashafan01 On: September 07, 2004 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story with many interesting charachters. The only problem is I want more lemons!!!!! Please!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashafan01 On: September 07, 2004 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Serendith On: September 06, 2004 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: emilee On: September 06, 2004 17:14 CDT
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I love this! Please keep writing and I hope you feel better.
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Reviewed By: Kichiko On: September 06, 2004 16:43 CDT
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Nice chappie! Its so kawaii! AWWWW, I don't know what else to say about this chapter because it rocks so much! Its just overly cute and adorable. lol. Not that I'm, or anyone else for that matter, is complaining. ^_^ Oh, you're not American or English? never knew that.. I'm Canadian, lol, but thats not my heritage. Anyways, about the person who was stealing your story, too bad you two didn't fight, because I would have been there cherring you on. Woot woot! lol. Well, theres nothing more to say than update soon! ^.^ Ja ne! P.S. Get well soon!
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