| "Roommates" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: amma On: August 23, 2004 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really cant belive it i finally found a fic that i really like usually if i find a fic thats not done i wont read it but this one idk was drawn to not i try to look out for everytime you update this is the only fic i look out for updates since "turnabout is fairplay" by ookami which is awesome by the way and the cliffys always get me on this one i cant wait to see what happens great job!! and hopefully update soon you really got something going here
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
YES U R MEAN! VERY VERY MEAN! Update soon
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Reviewed By: Cattykit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahh!! Write! Write! Write! Don't leave us hanging!! I completely LOVE this fic! The plot is so ensnarling and it's got me completely hooked. I love how their relationship is coming along! It's so cute and I can totally bet that something's going to happen next chapter. After all, a sexy-looking Kagome stuck with a hormonally-driven Inuyasha for an entire hour will definitely have an interesting outcome that I just can't wait to read! I'm so glad you broke things up with Kikyou! Yay! Now Inuyasha is free to chase Kagome! ^_^ I appologize but I have been "sneak-reading" for the last couple chapters, but I'll try not to do it again! =P If reviews are what give you encouragement, by golly, I'll give you reviews! Just keep it coming with the Inu/Kag fluff! The only thing I have to say constructively, is that you should indent everytime someone new talks. It's a rule in grammar. That way, people won't be confused about who is talking because each paragraph, only one person talks. Other than that, your grammar is fairly good which I am grateful for. You can't BELIEVE how many people have sucky grammar. I can't stand fics with bad grammar. Anyway, update REAL soon, kay? If you update soon, I'll give you a humongo review like this one! I really like this fic and I'm really REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. Really. So update soon! ~_^ ~cattykit~
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 22, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww! That was a mean ending! =( *sad face* But you will be making up for that in the next chapter, right? =P hehehe. YEY! Inuyasha and Kags had a whole day of getting along, hehehe. Can't wait to read more! keep up the great work! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Emilee On: August 22, 2004 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! i LOVE THIS STORY.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Milady Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, you'r so mean... Ending like that, you got to update very soon... This is fantastic and I love it a lot... Great job...
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Reviewed By: (taka) On: August 21, 2004 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know how to make your fans insane. @-@ PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 21, 2004 22:34 CDT
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that was mean.. *STARTS CRYING!* wah!!!! you better update a good one next time or else *EVIL GLARES* sobs.. great job though i like the story!
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was a great chappie but i want to know wat is going to happen between kago and yasha update soon please please please.....thankies....sayounara
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Reviewed By: Kichiko On: August 21, 2004 19:27 CDT
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Ack! Your so mean! How could you leave it like that?! T_T lol, *drools* oh god how I wish I were Kagome seeing Inuyasha like that.. *drools again* man! if she had tooken pictures and sold them on e-bay, i'd buy them all, lol. Hahahaha! I loved the whole blow up doll bit. very funny. AWWWWWW, Inu's expresion was too cute. *grins* wonder what Kag and Inu are gonna do. *wink wink* *nudge nudge* Hahaha, well anyways, thats all from me so the only thing left I have to say is update soon! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK (not logged in I think) On: August 21, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOO Huryy up and update. I'm lovin the story. What's gonna happen in thier "alone"time. Please hurry and update this story is really good.^_^ update update update
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Demonic Cliffy! No fair! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo please update soone and have a kag and inu lemon so long, it would take me days to read so please update asap
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 21, 2004 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: You are sooo mean!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! You are sooooo mean! HEY! The only cure for writers block is to right MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!! Love ya! -Demonicslayer-
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