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Reviewed By: Frabs! ^.^! On: March 10, 2005 15:19 EST
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WHAT DOES SHE KNOW???? Oh man, please update soon! ~Frabs! ^.^!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 19:43 EST
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Lol...I almost forgot! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! (I saw it on a forum!)
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what does she know?! It could be so many things! I AM DYING...PLEASE UPDATE FAST!!!!!!!
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Title: dancing- Pt. four
Reviewed By: turleskoi On: March 05, 2005 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No! I'm totally hooked on this, you have to continue soon, please... I love the relationship you've developed between Vegeta and Bra.
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Title: dancing, ch one
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute! I've never read where vegeta teaches Bra ki control. Your ingenuity is exceptional!
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Reviewed By: Evelyn (Vegge's Mate) On: March 05, 2005 00:47 EST
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Wow! I really love this chapter! It's your best yet! I love how it flows and moves along at a nice pace. It's very exciting! I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 04, 2005 23:26 EST
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hey great job... I loved the chapter... and can't wait to find out more about this girl and how vegeta will make her pay... nice
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 21:29 EST
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I'd forgotten how much I love this story. This territory is so fascinating to me--Vegeta IC negotiating this bizarre post-Buu family life. All the Heathers--LOL!!! I laughed out loud. Thanks for it. I thought the dialogue (always hard for me too) was great.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 06:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely cannot wait for Vegeta to get his hands on those brats! I'm dying of curiosity to find out what that secret is!! The way you portray Vegeta teaching Bra martial arts is spectacular. *grinz wildly* It's so sweet! Please update it soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: HolyAlmost On: February 16, 2005 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd love to be able to offer a constructive review and mention a point where I feel the fic could be improved along with all my points of gushing praise, but I can't. this fic is just all around awesome, I've never liked a fic enough to want to check back every single day for an update. I can't wait for it, but take the time to work your magic. I am so loving Vegeta in this. :D Keep up the exceptional work!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 05:37 EST
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*crosses fingers and prays mm.org lets her review through* A PLOT! And the post-Buu world is even more fully imagined. And everyone's believable, and B/V are charming as anything, and Bra is a whole character, and... and... I love this story! *now SEND send send you little review*
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 22:22 EST
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*Glares angrily at Heather and group* Those blackmailing little *BEEP*s! I wonder what the secret is? and I hope those girls pay DEARLY for they are doing!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:32 EST
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Very well done. I liked Trunks looking out the window at him and blanching as he saw Vegeta. I also wonder if Vegeta is more upset that his daughter is allowing herself to be blackmailed or that the older girl had the audacity to do it. I'm also looking forward to Trunk's reaction when the girl tries to use the number. -El-
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter!!! This is great. I enjoyed it so much. Because she is a demi-saiyajin no one would suspect she would ever go through that. I love how Vegeta and Bulma worked together -- that's so cool. Man, it takes a lot of restraint for him not to come to his daughter's aid. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!) On: October 29, 2004 19:03 EDT
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I've got to say, Ember, I'm amazed by the way you manage to keep Vegeta in character while he's playing the daddy figure. When it comes to Bra, it's hard to figure out how Vegeta would interact with her, but you're doing a great job of it.
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