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Reviewed By: Makota 2112 On: September 03, 2005 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please say that you are going to continue this story. It's too good to let die! Anyway, I absolutly loved it. And I hope *really I do* that you will update this sooner than later.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged in) On: August 21, 2005 11:33 EDT
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I am greatly enjoying this story so far the build up of tension in chapter 5 greatly increased my anticipation for the revelation of Bra's secret. It is quite sad that they have to go to such lengths to hide who they are, electrolosis and amputation seems inhumane but then again the situation calls for it considering the events which led to Vegeta's arrival on earth. However, since there is no evidence, as far as Bulma knows, connecting Vegeta to the attack on Earth surely it wouldn't matter if they did reveal their alien origins. In the Dragonball universe there are many half animal half human creatures living on Earth. It just seems like such a brutal gesture to erase visual evidence of ones origins. I eagerly await the moment when Vegeta tells Bra about his tragic past for I love how you depict their father daughter relationship and wonder if revealing his past will alter their bond somehow.
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Title: Silver Lady Crazy
Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 10:01 EDT
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Reviewed By: Silver Lady (not logged) On: July 08, 2005 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm still new, but by afar this is one of the best fics I read here. I love Vegeta's familiar stories,and loved the way he and Bulma act as one (sigh). That horrible girl... she made me mad!! I was very bullied in school, and seeing anyone in the same situation makes my blood boil. Hope Bra'll allowed to beat on her in the end. That's the least that b**tch deserves. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 00:51 EDT
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Another update! All your fics are awesome, but I really love these family-type ones. There's such a distinction in the various relationships Vegeta has with his family. I love the way he and Trunks banter! Chapter 4 was a hoot, but I could so hear them talking like that to each other! It's interesting that Vegeta handled Bra's... truth-mangling... the way he did. I can just imagine how you might have written it if it had been Trunks instead. I expect it would have been a completely different atmosphere. I also like how the issue was brought to the table and discussed as a family, although such a democratic way of handling conflicts might still be foreign to the prince. Revenge is going to be sweet. I can't imagine how hard it's going to be for him to have that "talk" with Bra. No daddy wants his image to be tarnished, especially when it comes to his little girl.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit (To god damn lazy to log in) On: May 24, 2005 05:15 EDT
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I love it. Maybe it's because I love stories with Vegeta and Bra, og maybe it's because it's so absolutely great written, or maybe it's because I'm a sucker for Vegeta when he shows affection in any kind towards his family.. :) I love it. keep it up, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: HolyAlmost On: May 23, 2005 22:20 EDT
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I *love* this story! :D Been checking every day for the updates and was very pleased to have found one today. thank so much for the great read and keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: May 23, 2005 19:50 EDT
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I love this story. I love how you've taken a beautiful one-shot with so many resonances and made it into a well-paced, fascinating *story.* And I'm so deadly curious about Vegeta and his family in this period. Thanks for showing them to me! And the Vegeta POV here was wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaking excellent. I've been waiting for an update for a while! You totally made my day! Update soon!
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Title: *twitches*
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 19:15 EDT
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Ember, you have outdone yourself again. I like how it goes into the martial arts on Vegeta-sei and Vegeta teaching Bura techniques even Trunks doesnt know. An all around awesome fic; Please don't keep up in suspense too long. That was an evil cliff-hanger, I must know the rest. *twitches* Bura PS-I have been a fan of yours for years now and I still love seeing new art or fics from you.
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Reviewed By: K On: April 12, 2005 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG she knows...but what the heck does she know?! ugh! you betta update darnit, i cant believe you left us hangin there. lol evil cliffy. but i cant wait to know. update soon pls !!!! What the f does that b*tch know?!?!?!?!!?!?!?? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 01:18 EDT
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I just started reading this story, and I blew through all four chapters in one sitting. As usual, your writing style is impeccable. I think you've done a great job exploring Vegeta & Bra's relationship. I love seeing Vegeta being a Dad, spying and all. It's sweet. Now, I'm VERY interested in what is going to happen at the performance!! Whatever it is, that girl has it coming to her! And what is Bra's secret?? Hmmmm.... Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 26, 2005 19:45 EST
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I've noticed this story emerging on FF.NET. Is it your doing or is someone trying to do a "Hercule" on you and taking your idea.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 00:46 EST
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She knows?? What does she know!? ack!!! *falls over* Please update soon before I lose my mind!!! =)
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Reviewed By: HolyAlmost On: March 13, 2005 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story so many times allready. Its just awesome and I can't wait to see where its heading. Keep up the great work!
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