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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Kilika(nsi) On: April 11, 2006 01:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this after reading HOTM, like a lot of the people who've reviewed. What can you say, that story got a lot of attension! However as much as I loved that one, I think I might like this one more. Maybe because Sess seemed more true to himself, never giving all his secrets up. This one just hit a place in my soul that not many stories, books, movies, or anything else often does.
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Reviewed By: Kumochan On: February 18, 2006 19:55 PST
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Terrifyingly believable. So well thought out, it was like peeling an onion. Honestly, I don't know why it didn't occur to me before, but if I had to relate Sesshoumaru to some kind of fruit or meat or vegetable, it would be an onion. All those layers...AND with the added benefit of a few tears on the side. Anyway, because I am an idiot and got distracted, and thought I had finished the review, I clicked to little button a bit too soon. Ah well, I suppose I got my point across.
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Reviewed By: Kumo-chan On: February 18, 2006 19:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupendous. Incredible. Lovely. ...Surprising. I have to admit that I often wondered just how you were planning to end this, and under the circumstances, you did beautifully. I seriously contemplated giving you a ten for creativity because the story in and of itself was just...wow. But then it hit me, and I actually thought about what it was about; without the meat on it. Kagome, stuck in present day world and in a form of chronic, well-hidden self-pity, finds Sesshoumaru. Messes around with him. Loses him. Gets him back, even if it's only for so long. But still, it was done so precisely, so deliberately that I couldn't help but fall in love with it. Here's to a story achingly well made and terrifyingly
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 06:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely amazing. Every sentence, and every paragraph kept me enthralled and wanting more. I felt like i could relate a bit to how Kagome felt sometimes, the way she felt suffocated by her friends, her family, and her life. The whole story was just so briliantly played out, and Kagome's character felt so real, so alive. All the characters were fleshed out as well, although in Sesshomaru's case, he was still an enigma to me, but i suppose that is part of who he is. The love scenes felt so authenic, you wrote them in a way that was just so lovely and sweet and passionate at the same time. Gah, I have a hard time expressing how happy this fic made me feel. All the little moments, all her reveries, and how they started and ended and came back together again, i felt you tied everything together really well albeit in a subtle way. The things Sesshomaru said by not saying them, this fic just seems to have so many layers in and out around it. It was just the best thing i've read in a very long time. Thank you for writing this. PS. Only one thing bothered me though, Kirara seemed to have dissapeared by the end of the story, the poor neglected kitty...
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Title: Fugue
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 17:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Fugue
Reviewed By: ShadowAssassin On: January 12, 2006 22:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is just too good for words. Definitely the best fic i've eva read, and i've read a lot!
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Title: Woh my!
Reviewed By: FreeFlowers On: January 12, 2006 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! I love the sess/kag pairing. I read HOTM before this, they are both good. *applauds while worshipping*
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover0007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome
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Title: Fugue
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 20:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story,I really loved it.Keep up the great work.Catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: Palikani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good I liked the flash backs and how the story was written I did feel the sting of tears at times but I liked it none the less. I was ever so happy you did not include the word passion, passionate, or any other form of that word in this story or Tales of the House of the Moon. I think it is overused. Well later This was Raining Tear Drops
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: villa-chinchilla On: September 12, 2005 07:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This wonderful lovely story has reall touched my heart and as a bonus it was hot as hell *giggle*
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Reviewed By: xXSasayakiXx On: August 20, 2005 03:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a beautiful story! I practically cried especially at the end when I realized that the story was finished. I found out about this story after reading your other story Tales of the House of the moon. I have to admit you write amazing Sess and Kag pairings. I also liked how you kept the characters in character. You're a very wonderful writer! Thank you for writing such amazing stories.
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Title: Fugue
Reviewed By: Nile [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 23:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful and yet heartbreaking at the same time. By the end I was almost in tears. This is a very well written piece and very unique in its own manner. In fact, more plausible especially for this particular plot.
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Reviewed By: haleos18 On: August 04, 2005 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. you're writing is so good...very psychological. it's something so terribly beautiful that it's heartbreaking.
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Reviewed By: TOWO On: August 02, 2005 00:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a incredible writer. I am someone who ships canon ships, but the way you write your Sess/Kag stories makes me think that they are canon. *le glomp*
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