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Reviewed By: Orb On: April 20, 2005 20:45 CDT
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Awesome stuff!! Sessho enjoys being vague about everything doesnt he? I guess he would since he's so....British. rotf! I know, its weird but it's true. He's so stuffy. I hope you can update soon. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 20, 2005 17:01 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Glad to see he has regained the use of Tetsaiga, that should help some if Naraku comes back... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 17, 2005 17:35 CDT
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Excellent chapter. So, Naraku finally made a move...lucky he attacked when he did or they might have been in serious trouble...the only thing is how did that youkai manage to sneak in... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb On: April 16, 2005 15:22 CDT
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Naraku is such a barstard I hat ehim so much most of the time. Poor Inuyasha, he's so protective, it's adoreable. I hope you want update soon. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Lesa On: April 07, 2005 18:03 CDT
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this story is so sweet, I love the relationship if Inuyasha and Kagome, and Sango and Miroku, lol it's so cute!!!! update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:22 CDT
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I absolutely love this fic!!!! I love your writting style! you give very good descriptions. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 26, 2005 15:23 CST
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Excellent chapter. That fitted nicely, handling the brief few moments while they readjusted to their new status and the others reactions to it. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLovELorn (nsi sorry) On: March 26, 2005 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww..... that was so sweet keep up the good work and update agaon soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 25, 2005 20:00 CST
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Excelelent chapter. So, Inuyasha and Kagome are now mated, hopefully this new step in their relationship will trigger new memories and give them a beeter understanding of the foe they face. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Glory On: March 20, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story. It's a really cool way to approach the story of Inuyasha, I haven't read anything like it. Your style of writing is also enjoyable. The only thing that annoys me is Kagome. I know that you are portraying her like in the anime, but she annoys me by being so oblivious to everything. She is the nice, innocent girl that you instinctively like, but is just gets to me how she doesn't see that what she does affects Inuyasha. And how she sits him for lots of things but never disciplines Shippo. Anyway, enough of that rant. I really do like your story though. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: JustAReader On: March 20, 2005 17:06 CST
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one of your best lemons yet! you waited until chapter 33 to put it in though, is that how you write your work now? lol j/k awesome chapter/lemon!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: March 20, 2005 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww I've been gone for the past 4 days, and here's nothing better I could ask to come home to then a great chapter by InuHime-sama. Kick ass chapter girl!! The lemon was beautiful and very tasteful. It was indeed a great place to put it. I can't wait for another chapter. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 13, 2005 17:42 CST
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As far as I recall I don't think that had seen him...I think he told Kagome not to tell them about him. So, he has finally made a move, trying to attack Kagome. Inuyasha best be on guard from now on, perhaps Sesshomaru could help him... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: March 13, 2005 13:52 CST
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this is great
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Title: revirew
Reviewed By: Orb On: March 12, 2005 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter. Naraku was mean to manupilate Kagome like that. But if she wasn't so nieve then I guess non of that stuff after the memory loss would have happened. OH well. I hope you can update soon. Take care!
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