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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 22, 2005 20:57 CST
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Excellent chapter. To be honest I like the way the fragments of memory keep giving us glimpses into their past, rather than simply presenting us with the ready made world you are building it up in both their actions of 'now' and their memories of 'then'. I eagerly await seeing how you plan to handle Sesshomaru in this universe. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Kimiko*Neko On: January 22, 2005 20:18 CST
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HEY, I JUST GOT FINISHED READING CHAPTER 19, AND I WANTED TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR. ONLY ONE THING BOTHERED ME, THE ENDING SONG AT THE END OF YOUR CHAPTER IS ACTUALLY DESTINYS CHILD emotions. JUST THOUGHT YA LIKE TO NOE!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 22, 2005 12:53 CST
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this great please update
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: January 21, 2005 22:46 CST
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this is great please update
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Reviewed By: Orb On: January 21, 2005 16:39 CST
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Great chapter, I wonder who the evil aura wa? It could be Sessho cuz of the Wester Lands, but who knows? CAnt wait for the next chapter. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 20, 2005 18:50 CST
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Excellent chapter, as always. So, they knew each other when they were younger...interesting. So the relationship between them goes back further than expected, it just remains to be seen what it was that did this to them in the first place. Sorry to hear you're feeling depressed. In truth I wish I could say something to help but I'm generally depressed most of the time myself...all I can say is that I hope things get better. As the Shintoists believe, there is balance in the universe so to be happy you have to be sad. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb On: January 11, 2005 16:59 CST
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great chapter as always. the plot is so intriguing, if it were a book, i wouldnt be able to stop, even for a second. I cant wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 11, 2005 16:29 CST
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Interesting chapter. TO be honest I know who that sounds like yet based on this universe doesn't quite fit with certain things I cannot be totally sure. I look forwards to finding out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon ok?
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 20:19 CST
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I really wish they would sort out the login... Nice chapter, sorry I took so long to review it. Kagome really shoudl listen to those two although I don't see her doing so...she has a far too trusting nature. I know it's late but Merry Christmas! And early, happy new year! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: somebody you dont know On: December 08, 2004 00:14 CST
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bum bum buuuuuuuuum!its naraku!kill the bastard!XD just keep updating!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm so relieved to see you added to the story. who is the man behind the curtain? great addition to the story. wow, kagome bot ballsy to straddle the hanyou. great idea. keep it up. :-)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm so relieved to see you added to the story. who is the man behind the curtain? great addition to the story. wow, kagome bot ballsy to straddle the hanyou. great idea. keep it up. :-)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 29, 2004 18:33 CST
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Sorry, missed out the birthday wishes here, hope I caught it in one of the others but if not a very late happy birthday now. Excellent chapter, it seems that the impass is about to be broken as Naraku (well, who else has purple fog?) has shown up, no doubt trying to kill them...again. Look forwards to seeing what's in store. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 23, 2004 17:56 CST
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Excellent chapter! Kouga getting a bit too firendly with Kagome...suprised Inuyasha didn't fight with him like...oh, yeah. I wonder if Kaede is still alive, would she be able to help them regain their past? Looking forwards to finding out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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