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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 17, 2004 18:51 CST
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Excellent chapter. I wonder what Inuuasha is going to do now...not only that but is he EVER actually going to tell Kagome about the mark...oh well. Let's just hope he does so before someone else tells her... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 01:16 CST
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LOL. i love the repitition. i'm lost in the story, which is a good thing. you have a great plot, as i'm sure i said earlier, and i'm so happy to see that you've updated. i am still confused over the ages and stuff...unless they haven't aged at all. HMM...intresting. i can't see a little Kagome, Yash and kouga running around (no matter how damn cute it would be) great character depictions and motivations. you have a great flow with the words as well as the dialogue. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Orb (I was online) On: November 16, 2004 17:32 CST
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uh-oh, this cant be good. but Inu and Kagome-chan were cuddling, thats cute. I'm glad you could update. I cant wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 13, 2004 15:36 CST
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Excellent chapter. Be interesting to see what exactly what happened all that time ago. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Stacy On: October 25, 2004 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Hope to read more, soon.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:28 CDT
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wow miroku know when to blow the mood
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun dun dun... Thanks for the update! ^.^ This is getting good... (hehehe)Can't wait to see how much longer it takes them to act on their feeling, or to see how things go with Koga *evil little grin*. I guess till next time *sigh* good luck and hopefully talk to ya soon! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 09, 2004 19:14 CDT
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Excellent chapter. Sorry I don;'t say much more than that but I can't really find a more eloquent way to express my opion. I really enjoyed it and look forwards to reading more. I hope the stress does lessen somewhat. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: October 09, 2004 17:20 CDT
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this was a cool chapter. I'm very interestesd to see what happens when they meet up with Kouga, because of him and Kagome. This story is so cute! lol
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Reviewed By: naughty angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:34 CDT
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I am really enjoying this. Please update soon. I have to know what happened in their pasts.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 22:43 CDT
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Oh... my... dear... lord... I think I might contemplate suicide after being kissed by Naraku! (blech!!) Although, kissing InuYasha could make any problems disappear, ne? Great chapter, this story is definitely picking up! I can't wait to see where it goes next!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:14 CDT
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great update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 30, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Excellent chapter. So, Naraku returns, eh? I would have hoped he was dead but I guess you can't have everything. Shippo's coming back too...I can't help but wonder if he will be older now as it seems that some time has passed or will he still be the little kitsune we all know. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 11:38 CDT
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excellent addition. wow...what happened when they were younger? where they younger? hmm....the silence is deafening....
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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i can't wait to see where this is going.the time thing is really throwing me for a loop, but hey, it definatly origional. good job and keep it comming.
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