| "Awaken" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: March 08, 2005 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Inuyasha and Kagome are really cute in this sotry. Who was that figure? Does Kaede really know something and is hiding it? Weird. I can't wait for a nother chapter. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 16:32 CST
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very good story.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 08, 2005 11:12 CST
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Excellent chapter. So, now they are starting to recal their first meeting, memories growing closer to the present. I can't help but wonder what they will recover next... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 27, 2005 16:30 CST
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Excellent chapter. Thank you for updating so many times in the last few days. However, don't feel obliged to update constantly, I hope you are able to get some rest and enjoy the convention. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Arigato ni yamette kodasai yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 love's Inuyasha On: February 27, 2005 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters are short and sweet, the story seems to be moving at a fairly rapid pace, which is nice. However I do find one thing that keeps, oh I don't know, bugging me I guess you could say...its really quite small this thing. See everyone expect for maybe Sesshomaru and Inuyasha keep saying Arigato, when every I hear arigato in an anime they usally say after what they are thanking someone for like: For helping Arigato gozai masu, I'm not say they way you use it is wrong I'd have to ask my sensei about it, but the apperence of Arigato so much in the fic has become tiring for me I guess...would it be horible to as that maybe, just maybe you minght find it in you heart to say thank you in english I think it would just flow better. Please don't think that this is a flame because that is not my intention, I just feel that all the arigato's are taking away from the story.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: February 26, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh geeze I'm like some stalker updating twice in a row! lol This chapter was cool, it was nice to see how Sango and Miroku met. Inuyasha wa sa little hard on Kaede, but it's Inuyasha. I hope Kagome doesn't get into trouble before he finds her. Take care!
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Title: revirew
Reviewed By: Orb On: February 26, 2005 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was really cute. I liked how they met. it was perfect. To bad Kaede didnt have much to tell them, maybe another character. I cant wait for another update, this story roolz!! Take care!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 26, 2005 16:53 CST
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Excellent chapter. I like how you played out their first meeting, the moment with Kagome rubbing Inu's ears was epctatular, I love how defensive he got when she suggested he was purring. I think it would be nice to see how Sango and Miroku met, although I have to admit I can't help but wonder if it will involve his trademark phrase... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: aaaaaaaaaaaaann
Reviewed By: essies2 On: February 25, 2005 23:25 CST
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this is great update
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 25, 2005 18:39 CST
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Excellent chapter. Glad to see Miroku behaving as something other than a pervert for once. I look forwards to seeing how his relationship with Sango prgresses. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 24, 2005 17:43 CST
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Excellent chapter! I actually feel sorry for Sesshomaru...he really needs to watch himself around her now. I can't help but wonder if Miroku will actaully manage to convince Inuyasha to convince to listen in on the girls. I can't help but wonder what they would hear and what would happen if they were caught... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: February 13, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats really sad about KaAgomes family. But the fluff did make it brighter. Yay genious author!! *throws confettii* Can't wait for the enxt chapter so see what happens next. Take care!
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn(nsi) On: February 12, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was some nice fluff after somthing so bad happend to Kagome well keep up the good work and update agina soon please?
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Title: cccccw
Reviewed By: essies21 On: February 12, 2005 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update
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Reviewed By: Orb On: February 10, 2005 14:58 CST
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Oh wow, their dead? Thats horrible. The suspence of the whole theme of this story is crazy wild! lol I hope they gt another lead soon. And yay for Shippo!!
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