| "Sleeping with the Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] |
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Reviewed By: kerina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 17:39 CDT
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i love this fic, it is so awesom! you represent naraku so well, and keep him in character, while totally making an awesome fic. infact, all the characters are very much in character, exept kagome seems a bit quiet, but thats still awesome! sucks that someone stole your work... ~~~~the great fan of your work, kerina, AKA the sorceress.
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 30, 2004 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!!!! love it...hope you update soon!!!x)
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Reviewed By: Amy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, good, good, but kind of short. I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update it really soon. -Amy-
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Reviewed By: kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, Good. Very well done, I've read every single chapter and hang on tightly as I wait for the next one. Personally I hope that Naraku and Kagome end up together, one way or another, and that in the end it is Kagome that gives Naraku more power through the feelings that she ignites inside of him rather than the jewel shards. Either that or Inuyasha discovers that Kagome willingly gave herself to Naraku and he unintentionally hurts her in his demon form, making Naraku step in and rescue the woman he desires.... ooooh so many possibilities!!! You just keep doing what your doing, and you can bet I'll hang around till the very end. -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: October 26, 2004 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next-how will Kagome keep the truth about her 'interlude' with Naraku a secret? I don't think Naraku will just let this go either-
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, man! I gotta know what happens next! What will she do, now? Will she return, or will Naraku give her an ultamadum? Update soon, darnit! I wanna know what happens!
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Reviewed By: lady girl On: October 15, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Not many people write a Nar/Kag fic and not have him rapping her or her turning into some kind of evil twisted thing. And you're keeping them in character so well. I hope you'll update soon cause I want to know what happends with Inu.
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Title: YoukaiNMe
Reviewed By: YoukaiNMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG..this was soo good!!! Finally a sexy story with Naraku!! Im so glad you wrote this!! Great Lemons also!!
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Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh good, I really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter, when she retures to Inuyasha. Please update really soon I can't wait to see what happens next. -Amy-
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 10:59 CDT
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YAY! YOU UPDATED! Now all you have to do is find the insperation to update again and again until the fic is complete so I can be happy!
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Title: katgome(sign-in problems)
Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that is an EXCELLENT job of presenting Naraku. You seriously amaze me. I have never seen anyone be able to pull something like that off. Talk about hats off to you! This fic just keeps getting better and better. I wish you did own InuYasha, all the stuff you could do! Love it!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:38 CDT
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ccolsa.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy-Erutis () On: October 01, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Good Chapter. PLS Update Faster This Time. ^^
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Title: The Spanish Inquisition Applauds Your Story.
Reviewed By: TokugawaShogn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job! You managed to pair Kagome and Naraku without altering either person's character. Your style of narration is nothing less than extraordinary, however the whole sex obsession is killing the plot, cut down on it a bit, there's a fine line between narrative porn and a story with sex, right now you're leaning on the narrative porn side, just a bit less in the future chapters is my only real reccomendation. Wonderful job. --Cardinal Xímmenez
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