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| "Time Soul Exodus" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: !i!i!Soooo many mysteries!i!i!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...what can I say? Good chap as always. Those moon priest are very confusing. I mean, I thought you were making them like some evil people trying to fool them, but then you made them act like they were good guys trying to show people the light...I mean what the fuck is that about? Could you confuse us anymore? I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking this. Shesh, you put so many mysteries in here, but it seems like you never answer them, then when you do...its like half an answer... shesh, that makes me not able to wait to read the next chap, even tho I really should be writin my stories. And did you know in chapter two when you put that swords made a burn like wound that you were going to make his holly powers go into the swords? I mean you write this story out so well; it seems to fit like a puzzle. Do you plan it out or just go with the flow? (lol flow...sorry.) Oh and you know what else, I think the end part after to be continued sounds like he's writing in a jounal...is he? lol Well yeah so you better update soon you got that? Cause I'm not waitin like a whole nother couple of weeks to read the next chap. OK? Good, and laterz ~~~P.S. Thanks for helping me on adultfanfic.net~~~~Laterz Inus_Kagome_Forever
| Reviewed By: Kovu On: February 05, 2005 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First Poll: My OC, Arcerdo Higurashi, do you either... 1. Like him, if so then list three things as to why? I like him, it's like the perfect idea of what Kagome and Inuyasha's runt would be like. Second Poll: About the plot itself, do you either... 1. Like it, why? It holds some damn good promise in the future Third poll: Which of these bad guys seemed most interesting: 2. Heitaro (The guy who Kedaru hates) 3. Jei (The Moon Priest) I'm torn between these two, I'm betting that the shapeless figure is Naraku and I don't like Kedaru, he's what I step on, Heitaro is a very amusing jackass when it comes to an arachnophobics worst nightmare and Jei... There's a lot about him that hasn't been covered and has me curious to learn more Fourth Poll: What do you think about the mysterious, nameless character that keeps observing Inuyasha and Kagome? 1. Do you find him/her interesting? I have come to the conclusion that it's Arc, but after you put the him/her.... I wonder, is it Kagura, or a character you haven't introduced yet. I'd say Arc though because of your last chapter where it hurt so much to be near Kagome and Inuyasha again and not be able to reveal itself to them yet. That and the "Some things are stronger than the best cloaking spells" only a family or mate bond would hit that chord. Lemme know how close I got.
| Title: response to poll
Reviewed By: osuwari00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
1. I love Arcerdo. He is passionate and concerned. I usually do not read fics with OCs, but I find Arcerdo fascinating. 2. I absolutely love the plot. It makes me feel like I am watching an actual episode of Inuyasha. It is comforting and very interesting. 3. The big un-named character interests me the most. I feel like Naraku must be involved in this story. I may be wrong, but I feel as if he is there, lurking... 4. I am extremely interested in this mysterious that is hiding in the goshinboku. Why can't Inuyasha or Kagome sense him? I simply cannot wait until we discover who it is. I can't help but think of Kikyo, but also, Sesshoumaru, maybe Kohaku. But, then again, an OC would be quite interesting.... I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! oh my god do i!
| Reviewed By: osuwari00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 00:58 CST
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this story is amazing! I was amazed by the thought at the end of Secret Revealed..? It is just wonderful. Your grammar needs work, if you would like a editor, I would be more than happy to help. I love your writing, and would live to help you make it absolutely perfect.
| Reviewed By: digger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Poll
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poll 1-1-: I like Arc, hes sweet and somewhat inocent (like hojo...I like that) he's not Sesshomaru and by that i mean you're not doing a Kagura/Sess pairing, and third he fits in very well with all the other characters, almost as if he was always part of the show.~~~~~Poll 2-1-:I like the plot, not all sequels come out this well but this one has. Its great and I like reading about Kagura and Arc.~~~~~Poll 3-3-: Jie, he definatly seems the most interesting.~~~~~Poll 4-1-:the character is interesting, I'd like to know more about this character and I really wonder if its Arc.~~~~~Ok there, answered them all, hope it helps, laterz
| Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You shouldn't be sorry bout this chap, its a filler, and all stories need them. So why don't ya get to writing the next one please!! lol well talk to ya later ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Inus_Kagome_Forever Laterzz ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
| Title: Review received by Email from: FallenSeraphim
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Great little chapter. A few questions does arise and i have a feeling that some of them are not going to be answer from reading the text (or maybe i just plain forgot). 1. What is the crystal the bees are looking for. 2. What is the matter with the little girl. One minute, she is a little girl; the next, she contains wisdom beyond her years. i know you gave some background in other chapters, but i have a feeling that moment may of gave some confusions. That it for this round but i like this story and i like the way you write. Too bad that this stuff can't be compt off as original. Good job, Erik P.S. I wrote a review under a different email address and site (AFF.com) (Fallenseraphim2479@yahoo.com) doesn't matter which one you respond to so have fun and i hope you can answer my questions without giving away some of your plot
| Title: Review i received through Email, if you have problems reviewing, please send them through Email instead, my address is: Zelix@jippii.fi
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a good chap. I think its about time she found out. I just cant wait till she finds out who his parents are!!! lol. So uh.... update soon. cant wait to see the next chap and laterzzz Inus_Kagome_Forever
| Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap, dont rewrite it. um... I hope you can update soon. But i was wondering, how long is it gonna take for him to find his mate? is this connected to her or what? is this just something he has to do before he can go search for her? its his mate man. So whens he gonna find her? And how exactly did she disapear in the first place, that really confused me. oh and who was that guy? it must of been arc right? that was saying not yet or something, he had to wait before it went totally wrong again or something? Damn your stories are confusing, good, but confusing. well, i guess later for now.
| Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 19:29 CST
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great chap, dont rewrite it. um... I hope you can update soon. But i was wondering, how long is it gonna take for him to find his mate? is this connected to her or what? is this just something he has to do before he can go search for her? its his mate man. So whens he gonna find her? And how exactly did she disapear in the first place, that really confused me. oh and who was that guy? it must of been arc right? that was saying not yet or something, he had to wait before it went totally wrong again or something? Damn your stories are confusing, good, but confusing. well, i guess later for now.
| Reviewed By: Dreamfox On: December 04, 2004 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as ever! keep it going!
| Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you updated! Great chap! I reviewed, so update! YOu know what, your story's kinda complicated, and confusing...but i guess thats whats so interesting about it and all your stories that i've read, (i think only 3 of yours i've read, lol). well cant wait for the next chap, i really wanna know more about these fuckin moon priest! talk to ya later i guess, byezzz
| Reviewed By: No matter, just a reviewer On: November 27, 2004 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply put, a fucking awesome fic! Update soon please!
| Title: Plzzz say this review is long enough, lol
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, im gonna try to right along review ok! lol. So anyways, sorry for not reviewing your last chap. I just read the ending of it. I cant wair to read the um other story or yours, i just got a review about it. i really need to check it out, it sounds interesting. Well anyways, as always, you write really really well. Hope Chizu's mom doesnt die... tha'd be bad. And who exactly are those moon priest??? i mean come on! When are you gonna reveal all the answers to his questions, not to mention ours? Well uh hope you update soon, and that you like this review of mine cause its longer! lol, most likely cause im hyper and cant stop typing/chatting/talking lol! Damn i am hyper, well anyways, you really need to update and i'll talk to ya later, k Cya^~~^~~~*~~~^~~^ Dom ^_^ Laterzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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