| "How we came to be" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My,my... Im really lost for words for your first ending. Its amazing and touching and there are really no words for it. Second ending... Well "happy" endings are always good and you had some nice twists in it. Perhaps Zoya could become a sequel to this story? Ah.. but maybe that would be too mushy dunno... Anyway: Really enjoyed your work and looking forward to some more in the future
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i got all teary eyed after the 1st ending. but it was awesome! i loved it!
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: March 17, 2007 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story.... it was/is amazing! both endings were great (be it the first was sad) But great!
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I HATED THE FIRST ENDING! BUT I LOVE THE SECOND YOU YOU CAN LIVE! OMFG! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome chappie. its gonna end up being a sad ending i think.....*tear* lol continue
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! IF KAI OR FAITH DIES SO HELP ME I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOUR LIFE A LIVING HELL! OMG! the anticipation is killing me! Please hurry and write! PLEASE! So many possiblities! OMG! OMG OMG OMG! HURRY HURRY HURRY!
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Title: awesome chapter!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 17:04 CST
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^^ ye[adoodle. tis cool
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Reviewed By: Aubrey's girl On: February 19, 2007 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story... its touching... uhh... yeah...(not something I usually say)keep it up! ^.^ can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: it's hot in here
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: February 16, 2007 12:24 CST
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whoo! kai and faith getting freaky in the bed! i can't wait to see the babies...on second thought i can wait.but it's so cute! i love watching pairings like this!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 21:18 CST
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sorry it took so long! ive been...caught up with things....lol but i still LOVE your story!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic fanfic! Really love what you've done with the beybladers! ^^ By the way: My grammar isnt perfect, but not bad either... and i can read... XD... so if you still need some beta's? (A) Just mail me.
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Title: YAY YAY YAY!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG! YAY YAY YAY! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! I LOVE IT! AND GO WITH THE MATURE ONE SHOT! PLEASE! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! There was one part um "When I woke up and can't get back to sleep" should be "when I wake up and I can't get back to sleep" or something like that. But thanks for the awesome fic, can't wait till the next chapter!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:42 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt review the last chappie. but your story is so....wonderful....like...i cant explain it. i love it. and youve got to keep going!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! True love concures all! Why are we so forgiving of those we love? It's like they have a magic curse over us that makes us overly forgiving. But anyway it was totally awesome but there was one spelling mistake near the top. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: I LOVE YOU!
Reviewed By: Bio Uotani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! In the healthy best friend fan girl kindda way, not the creepy lezbo stalker kindda way. But you writting is so deep! I love it I love it I love it! You are the best writter in the world! OMG! I have never read such genous! MORE!
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