| "Egypt Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Welcome back! I understand how it can be with life getting in the way. I went through that this summer as well with moving, losing my job, and getting used to a new one. So, do waht you can and I will wait patiently. I thuroughly enjoyed this chapter, as I have the previous 19. I hope Inu won't be missing for far too long, knowing he got out, thank God. And you know I am more than willing to give you praise and encouragement, knowing how important it is to receive that from readers. Hope to see another chapter soon *hug*
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: September 18, 2005 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
OKAY OKAY!!!! yteesh, i'm reviewing! well, ANYWAY, awesome chapter, and i really hope you can find time to update soon! twas really awesome1 ^^
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:13 CDT
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Welcome back! I hope you had a great time and I know I am dying to hear about it. You should write a little bit about your experience in the A/N. What a perfect chapter to start back up on. It has a little bit of romance, anguish, and suspense in the end. A great way to get all the readers back into the story after the break. I am on the edge of my seat now...I mean Naraku paying for Kagome and her family just deceiving her this whole time! And Sango and Kagome's fathers being friends or at least knowing one another…the plot thickens! And Inuyasha keeping himself closed up…I know he means well, but come on. I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for continuing...I had no doubts, but still thanks for sharing this with us.
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. The reasearch and information you packed into this story is amazing. You have out done yourself. It's really an exciting and original piece. I love it. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 11:49 CDT
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i love it! I like how the story is actually realistic, well as much as it can be! Well great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic very much, at the beginning I was really doubting if Kag and Inu would ever met. The way everybody tricked them to get closer is great, I loved the idea of a drunk Kagome. Great kissing scenes, I hope he keeps saving her and showing his concern, Inu is so damn cute when he does. Best wishes!!
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Title: Coolness!!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon On: May 25, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks!! I am a muslim myself, though not arabian, and a lot of the things you wrote caught my attention and curiosity(sp?). I have always been interested in Egyptian myth and culture and so this story really rocks!! I can't wait for the next installement and I hope you don't get discouraged from writting if you don't get new reviews. Peeps are only lazy; that's all there is to it! Well, you're officially in my fav list. Till next time!
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Reviewed By: nirvana22322 On: May 20, 2005 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and don't worry you don't suck you're a great writer
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Reviewed By: Lady Pip On: May 13, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! you gave kagome some depth, it makes me so happy. I think i've learned more reading this story than i have in my history class. haha. It rocks! I can't wait for the next update. Always, Lady Pip
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Title: so not logged in
Reviewed By: tanwen-whi... On: May 12, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm. ok, you said you wanted critism, riiiight? ok, well, you asked for it! i think you should double space your paragraphs. your whole story looks scrunched . and small paragraphs too! oooo, it pisses me off when i cant keep track of what line i'm on because all the wors srae in one place!!!! but, other than that... terrific chapter! but, you cant get really drunk off of two freakin shots. really. not even if it's your first drop of alcohol! you'll get a buzz, and that's it. trust me. well, i hope you update soon! fabulous chapter!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled across this and decided to try it out, now I'm REALLY glad I did. This story is amazing! Combining Inu-Yasha and Egyipt, nothing better! I really love this and I hape you continue it soon, this stories definately in my favourites.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 12:42 CDT
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Hey great chapter. Sorry about the lack of reviews, I don't understand why, you have a great story. If it is any consolation, some of the best stories I have read have only a few reviews and I don't know why that is. Anyway, I loved the whole setup. Miroku must have done some fast talking to get Sango in the deal! Love the food in this chapter some of my favorites. Did you know that your story is nominated for *Best Action Adventure* from the Fanguild? That will get you some more exposure and maybe some more reviews! Have a great trip!
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Reviewed By: Davi Man On: May 12, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good so far. Did Mirkou put something in the Whiskey? It sure seemed like it. Well anyhow keep udpating!
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Reviewed By: bk On: May 12, 2005 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I'm so glad you were able to update. Your knowledge on Egypt is absolutely amazing. I will be looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks for such an entertaining fanfic.
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dances around like I won the lottery* Inu and Kagome kissed and said they liked each other! YAY! This chappy has brought a huge smile to my face! Thanks for the awesome update! Man, that sly Miroku...I gotta give him kudos for that one! Ha ha haaaaa! And as far as reviews are considered, I hear ya. I have two really awesome fics that get more reviews on ff.net than here and I get tons of viewings here. I don't get it either. But, you know I'm still here, and I will be patiently awaiting your next awesome update! And good luck on the rest of your finals ;-P
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