| "Egypt Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: nirvana22322 On: April 29, 2005 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i love it there should be more inu/kag fluff because i enjoy that more but w/e you write is fine.
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 21:30 CDT
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Good chapter. I like the insight into the past with Kikyo and Yasha. I like that you added some layers to Kagome's character. Explaining some of her history helps with her characterization. I have to vote for inu/kag fluff; however, I enjoy both and whatever fits your story better is fine with me. I hope you have a great trip! Your readers will miss you!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 16:21 CDT
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Since I'm a huge Inu/Kag fan, I'd say more fluff between them!! Please!! And great job on your fic. I think it's coming along wonderfully!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: April 26, 2005 15:21 CDT
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more inu/kag fluff, please. and, please update before you go to mexico!!!! PLEASE??? ok, it was a fabulous chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lady_Pip On: April 26, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles madley* I love your story so much! I just wish you weren't going to put it on hiatus for such a long time *pout*. I recently got back from Europe and we did make a small side trip to Cairo, great fun. Anywho, I think that there should be more Inu/Kag fluff because I can never get enough of Inu/Kag fluff, it's so....fluffy. haha. Well update soon, and have fun in New Mexico(i've been there too, it was great fun also). Always and huggles, Lady Pip P.S. Give Kagome a little more depth, like some deep dark secret in her past or some hidden talent that she can use to help Inu. It's just an idea. Well, again have fun and update as soon as you finish chapter 18.
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Title: Nice *nods*
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this update! It has been a long time since you updated last, but I understand what it's like to suffer insecurities or writer's block on fics. I've got one on haitus myself for various reasons. So, Kikyo was involved with Inu earlier, huh? What a bitch! Man, I can't wait to see what happens with Inu and Kags though. I love the fluff between two characters who least get along, ya know? I'd love to see Inu and Kags fluff next chapter, if it doesn't screw up the plot of the fic. K? Ja ne 'til next time!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Rouyakan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 15:46 CDT
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omgomgomgomgomg!!!! You updated on my birthday!! OoOoOoOohh, what a cool birthday present!!! ^^ I
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: March 26, 2005 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea great chapter loved the sexual tension in the fight scene keep it up and wind up the spring of tension double time. AAA please don't make Kagome such a girly girl(swon, faint, babble ARGH) or maybe have her grow stronger in the story. :D THEORY!!! AAAAGGGGHH runs away screaming. Lets see the only thing i remember about it is ummm it takes a more individual aproch to everything u find in a site. ????? maybe????? Ahh SW arch. I know it well and dislike it much. LOL if you go to school in NM that is what is force feed into you in EVERY arch/anth class. Chaco was up in northern NM and the Anazazi are the anhcants. that the Navaho and Apache both say they come from. Puebloan people. if u get a chance head to Chaco Canyon its AWSOME. if u have questions I'll help(if i can :P)
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Reviewed By: nirvana2232 On: March 20, 2005 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i can't wait for the next chap. plz update soon the story is so good!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: March 17, 2005 11:58 CST
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Wow--Amazing chapter! And if I do say so myself-- I think that your action scene went rather well. It kept my interest the entire time! =P Ah, and I do also love the growing thing that is happening between Inuyasha and Kagome-- and the Hojo scene: Priceless! hehe. Keep up the great work! I love this story and cannot wait to see what will happen next! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: vtchachi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have really enjoyed your fanfic. Your knowledge of Egyptology adds depth to the story. I have always been infatuated with Egypt and all its wonder, so I am thoroughly enjoying the picture you are painting. I even pulled out my old art history book and my books on Egypt and its culture so that I could visualize some of the landmarks like the hotel in your story. I have not had a chance to go yet. Your character development is coming along nicely; however, I am a bit surprised there isn't much passion in Kagome. Her character is so superficial now. Other than helping Sango, Kagome is like playing a part and has no depth. I would have thought she would have had a hidden passion for something that she could share with the others…or maybe she does and it has not be revealed yet (sneaky writer)! Anyway, great job! One of my favorites.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy, they're coming along nicely, aren't they? I can't wait to read how Inuyasha and Kagome finally come to terms with how they feel for each other...*excited* This fic is undoubtedly one of my faves! I am so glad to give you reason to write and post this masterpiece of fiction you have here. Plus, i loved the fight scene, I saw everything as it happened! Nice job, and I have to say, "Keep it up!"
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 17:48 CST
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i know. i LOVE getting reviews. really. it's SWEET! and what exaqctly did sango whisper into kagome's ear? im SO curious. and i thought your action scene/gun fight was well done. really. action is hard to write. i think that it's easier to write it as if you are watching from a distance. narrarator type thing, instead of all from inuyasha's point of view. well, i hope you update soon1 <
b>ja ne! ~tanwen
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 04:27 CST
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ooohh hey are you headed to the Grey Ranch in the boot hill with Dr. Walker? (thought last summer was their last season) I never did have the money to go...so i wound up doing a survey Archaeology fieldschool. Dr. Staski is tottaly awsome. Well were looking for rements of the Cimino Real. (graduated from NMSU BA Anthropology) :P
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 04:21 CST
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Good greif NO NO don't let the EVIL b...Um Kikyo know where they are going no no no no no no....Sigh. Good job more por favor 'Orion
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