| "Egypt Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: tanwen-whitefire (not logged in) On: February 15, 2005 16:15 CST
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OH! ive read 'bus stop fairy tale' IT WAS SUPER GOOD! but then they erased it off fanfiction.net, and i didnt know she had a mediaminer.org account, so HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY!!! okay, awesome chapter! but, the worst job is definitely answering the phone at a chinese food restaurant. DRUNK PEOPLE TRYING TO ORDER CHINESE FOOD CAN BE JACKASSES!!!! ok... well, awesome chapter! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: bk On: February 14, 2005 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! Hope you will be able to update soon. Congrats on the graduation and the acceptance.
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i am SOO glad you finally updated! i hope other ppl who read this wonderful story will REVIEW! gods, i get really upset when ppl just READ and DON'T review! it makes me think i didn't write very well...BUT, this story is very well done, so KEEP IT UP!
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Title: All right!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fight!!!! ha ha haaaa! I can't wait 'til Inu and Kags finally get together. That relationship shall be interesting and fun to read about, indeed. And I have to say, congratulations on your upcoming graduation, and I am glad to hear you have been approved for field study in archeology! You rock! And yeah, we all go through a case of the 'Fuck its' every now and then and retail sucks royal monkey privates...Bleh. But I'm still here, waiting for more, bud! ;-P
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 14, 2005 00:04 CST
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*dances around to the jaw's music* ou ou ou ou ou LOVES IT!!! I cannot wait to see what waits beyond the jaws music!! Before any clues were given I was all "THAT'S KIKYO AT THE FRONT DESK!!!!" okay-- so maybe it wasn't all that hard to figure that out but I just get so excited when I figure something, te he he. For awhile I thought that perhaps Kagome would bring up Sesshoumaru just to make Inuyasha jealous. ah, cannot wait to see what is in store for us readers. I bet it will be fabulous. Speaking of fabulous, how much do you love that Sue? haha. Have you read any of her other stories besides Meta? If you're like me you've read them all, hahaha. (And I highly recommend them!) And Sabichan is also fabulous. Well it takes fabulous to know fabulous. I think that I may have over used that word and will hereby be banned from using it any more in this review. Keep up the amazing work-- you talent is clearly evident in your writing; I am still enjoying it greatly! Take care and good luck/have fun with your story!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- still not signed in On: January 29, 2005 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Opps, I forgot to do this *points up at ratings* Perfect 10's, all around. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: aitu-- not signed in On: January 29, 2005 16:33 CST
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Wow-- this story is fantastic-- Art is also one of my many hobbies-- It's refreshing to read such a story as yours, hehe. You've done a wonderful job connecting everything together. I cannot wait to see what will happen next. After Kagome was first kissed by Sesshoumaru I really hoped that they would get together but I also like her with Inuyasha so it should all prove to be quite enjoyable. Sesshoumaru-- what a guy-- he's being rather devious right now, huh? hehe, loves it! I wonder if he'll turn up the heat by trying to make Inuyasha jealous once Inuyasha starts to like her more? Hmm, who exactly does Sesshoumaru intend to marry? Could it be Kagura? Or perhaps his ward Rin once she gets older? Or maybe it's someone that we don;t even know! hehehe Just curious (I tend to ask lots of questions that people wish not to answer because it gives everything away, haha--so don't mind me)Well, once again, this story is fabulously wonderfull and I will be eagerly waiting for more and it will also be added onto the favorites list ASAP! Keep up the great work and good luck with your writing! ---Aitu
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Title: Woo Hoo!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! YAY!!! He has to play the hero and watch over Kags ans Sango! Now this should get interesting! Thanks for the update, and I patiently await the next chappy ;-P
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 10:16 CST
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oooh! that was a close call! and by anychance was the theif kikyou? or maybe kagura? please dont make kagura evil please? she's cool! anyway... awesome chapter! i didnt find a lot of spelling mistakes, so that's good. well, i hope you update soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO COOL!! IT IS AWESOME!! AND THE SWEET FLUFF BETWEEN KAG/SESS AND KAG/INU WERE SOO TOTALLY CUTE!!! UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 01:57 CST
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I was just thinking of this story tonight and how I've been missing updates. Your posting was rather fortuitous. I am thoroughly enjoying this- original, in character (well, Sess is a bit OOC, but not too much) and engaging. I eagerly look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say at first I wasn't sure what to think about this story, but as it progressed I found myself absolutly lost. Your knowledge on the subject is vast and because of which you have skillfully created a wildly imagative tale. I really can't wait for the next chapter, and thank you for the long chapters they are appreacated. I'm sorry about my terrible spelling, but it is late and I just couldn't stop reading. I hope you continue you story soon. Till then good luck and good work!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These past couple of chapters you've posted have been simply awesome! And I must say, I am very glad to know that my reviews are part of your main reason for posting this wonderful fic. Your knowledge of Egypt is so neat and intriguing. It makes me wish I could go see Egypt, but the possibilities of that are slim to none...*sits in the corner and pouts*
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Reviewed By: tanwen(not signed in) On: January 09, 2005 13:34 CST
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awesome chapter!!! THEY KISSED! TWICE! you have one happy reader on your hands, i can tell you that much!^_^ well, i look forweard to your next chapter. thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 07:41 CST
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Beautiful!!! *cries* I like the fact that you actually know what you're talking about *not that I know much of anything about Egypt* and the way you've set the background for the story. Superb! lol, and what's with Kagome getting randomly kissed by the men in her life? *sigh* Happy writing, and I can't wait for your next update! ~Xaenthe
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