| "Concubine Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: really interesting take on a good anime
Reviewed By: merzbow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy tenchi fics and this is among the better ones its interesting because of the choice tenchi makes(im not spoiling it) the acctual writing is awsome. (hoping to see more of this fic soon) i love the descriptions of the surroundings and how the charecters are used. The sex is good but not over used as in some fics. on another tenchi related note i hope tmffa come back soon(its still down now 28/june/08) its one of the best places to get tenchi fics on the net and tbh the reason i started reading fics in the first place.
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Reviewed By: RanjuM1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a solid fic, with good plot and character develepment as it moves on and it does so fluidly. You did get caught in the character stereotypes a bit (I know it is harder than hell not to in a tenchi fic) but it didn't hurt the story. Actually I think it helped because this was a Tenchi story. Also I would like to clarify that when I say character stereotype I mean the stereotype placed on characters in fanfiction (Or how many fanboys/girls think a character should behave) not just the genra in general. Still, great job!
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Title: Thou art mighty.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONLY seven chapters? Blasphemy. Congratulations! This story has recieved the K.T.S. Seal of Ownage.
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Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Simply amazing. I applaud you sir, for being the first quality author to choose, as I had, that Tenchi should pick all of the girls. The story is wonderful, and the lemons ain't to shabby, neither. Keep up the good work, and we all promise to bear in mind the virtue of patience... For a while anyway.
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Reviewed By: lk3585 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been so eager for the next chapter of a fanfic to come out. Well written, original, and highly accurate on character personalities. If there is more to this I'll gladly read.
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Title: Concubine Cronicles
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second time I've read this. Very hot lemon scenes. hoped to see further exploits in this story but they haven't appeared yet so write more.
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: Hagabagaboo On: June 07, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, read part seven. You kick ass. I started reading thinking it was mindless porn stuff, but you've actually got a damn good story and characterization and all of that. KEEP GOING! I see a part eight... maybe that's just me. But that would kick ass.
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Reviewed By: comments On: June 05, 2005 20:21 CDT
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I enjoyed reading this story. I think Thechi SHOULD marry all of them. You did make a mistake about how Sasami will age though. She will age like a normal earthling until she's an adult. I think the reason many people think that Sasami will take a really long time to grow up is that Hitoshi Okuda got it wrong in the manga. I hope you will continue with this story. I'm not going to tell you how you should continue it though.
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: June 03, 2005 19:44 CDT
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The Princess position eh, nicely done research B... I'll remember that when I come up with no other idea or lack of positions to write in for my story. Other than that good chapter
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Sakura501367 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, now all I have to do is wait for more^_^ joy
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Reviewed By: johnk On: June 01, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter, sweet and lemony, but I would have really liked to see just one sentence added at the end... 'And alone in her room, a girl named Sasami cried herself to sleep'.
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Reviewed By: Ramiel On: May 31, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fuck, an update. I'm in awe. Concerning that, I have to agree with you on the sugar/waff content of the thing. A little on the heavy side for my tastes. Also, for some reason, I can't shake the feeling that you're neglecting Washu. Then again, that might be the 64 ounces of highly caffeinated coffee I drank just now. Excellent work overall. I'm looking forward to another update sometime within the next 4-6 months :|
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:13 CDT
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I swear, if you don't stop kicking yourself about your story being bad, I'm gonna throw an evil shoe of doom at you. update soon please.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: A-Z Mk II On: May 30, 2005 06:36 CDT
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Good work, B. Is it just me, or does Washu have definate, detailed plans for Ayaka, even above and beyond her normal plotting self? ;) Looking forward to the next chapt.
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Title: Ch.7 Royal Treatment
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter if I do say so myself. I really like this story becuz it is fun to read and it sounds exactly like the way the real way would happen. I noticed only a few minor spelling errors but they are nothing to worry about. I can't help but wonder where the story will go because Tenchi has slept with all of the older girls. I do hope that this story will at least have a couple more chapters because the future of the Tenchi-love hexagon hasn't been talked about. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out and thanks again for another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.
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