| "Concubine Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taro MD On: June 03, 2005 19:44 CDT
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The Princess position eh, nicely done research B... I'll remember that when I come up with no other idea or lack of positions to write in for my story. Other than that good chapter
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Sakura501367 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, now all I have to do is wait for more^_^ joy
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Reviewed By: johnk On: June 01, 2005 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter, sweet and lemony, but I would have really liked to see just one sentence added at the end... 'And alone in her room, a girl named Sasami cried herself to sleep'.
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Reviewed By: Ramiel On: May 31, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fuck, an update. I'm in awe. Concerning that, I have to agree with you on the sugar/waff content of the thing. A little on the heavy side for my tastes. Also, for some reason, I can't shake the feeling that you're neglecting Washu. Then again, that might be the 64 ounces of highly caffeinated coffee I drank just now. Excellent work overall. I'm looking forward to another update sometime within the next 4-6 months :|
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:13 CDT
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I swear, if you don't stop kicking yourself about your story being bad, I'm gonna throw an evil shoe of doom at you. update soon please.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: A-Z Mk II On: May 30, 2005 06:36 CDT
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Good work, B. Is it just me, or does Washu have definate, detailed plans for Ayaka, even above and beyond her normal plotting self? ;) Looking forward to the next chapt.
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Title: Ch.7 Royal Treatment
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter if I do say so myself. I really like this story becuz it is fun to read and it sounds exactly like the way the real way would happen. I noticed only a few minor spelling errors but they are nothing to worry about. I can't help but wonder where the story will go because Tenchi has slept with all of the older girls. I do hope that this story will at least have a couple more chapters because the future of the Tenchi-love hexagon hasn't been talked about. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out and thanks again for another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HalcyonWolf On: May 24, 2005 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While the 'Tenchi gets all the girls' isn't a new idea, your story holds this reader's attention with an iron grip. Enjoying that everyone feels in character and am curious about what plot direction you're going to take your fanfiction now that the sex has started.
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Reviewed By: Nobody's Special On: May 23, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congradualtions, you have my admiration. While I realize quality takes time, I would like to ask that you step up the pace a bit. Originality appears to be the only weak point in this fic, but as is the idea is much better exicuted then ussual. The only major fualt in your work is your insistence that it sucks, stall putting that until a few reviews.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: May 10, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you wrote this fic, and in my opinion its the only way to have a happy ending for everyone. Personally I agree, the only way to describe Mihoshi's skin is chocalate.
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Reviewed By: J.Crown On: May 01, 2005 20:32 CDT
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Great story, can't wait until you update, please, do soon.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fan fiction. You should be very proud of it. The storyline is breathtaking. The first like three chapters were just... so good I can't find the words to describe them. Excellent, just purely excellent. Hope there's another chapter.
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Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the fact that the 'Tenchi and company orgy' routine have been done before, you very skillfully execute it. Though the plot seemed just a bit rushed, this is a exellent story. Can't wait for an update! And no, you do not suck!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Gurl (not logged in) On: March 01, 2005 21:40 CST
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why do great fic writers insist that their fics suck? You seriously don't suck at any of this stuffs, so quit kicking yourself! Update it agaian soon. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:36 CST
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Ok, so Ch. 6 was a really long time in coming, but it was still worth the wait. Refer back to my last review, I still love this fic. If you make us wait this long for the other two (Mmm, Washu), I think I'll lose it. Seriously, it could very well be your fault if a small animal gets tortured. Can you live with that?
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