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Title: Chaos Knight
Reviewed By: HolyKnight On: August 31, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm one of his readers in the AA and i know his work well...... BTW, My Vote goes to Emma Frost......
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Reviewed By: Littlepet On: August 31, 2004 16:37 CDT
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me again actually ranma with either rogue or emma!
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Reviewed By: Littlepet On: August 31, 2004 16:36 CDT
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Nice story I'll e-mail you my comments but here's my vote on pairrings : ranma with rogue nabiki with don't know wanda would be different but I don't mind for nabiki
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Reviewed By: Alagon On: August 31, 2004 15:45 CDT
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Brilliant and entertaining story. I vote for rouge/Ranma matchup
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Reviewed By: p00t On: August 31, 2004 13:38 CDT
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ranma should be with jean or nabiki. isn't rogue his half sister?
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Reviewed By: confucios On: August 31, 2004 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reguarding pairings My vote is for Ranma and Rogue couple. This a very well thought out story the characters are new in some ways but stay true their roots. Will we see Ranma, Rogue and Ristys date next chapter? And finally what is going to happen if both Rogue and Jean fall for Ranma?
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Reviewed By: Jeremiah On: August 31, 2004 11:38 CDT
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I like this fanfiction. I vote for Rogue. I don't think ranma would be completely helpless to telepathy. If Nabiki is a telepath she can teach him how to make some crude protective measures not enough to stop a telepath from reading his thoughts but enough so he'd at least sense them. Also reading Ranma's surfice thoughts or blasting him unconscience would be fine but I think it would be dangerous to read his memories because they would run into things like the neko-ken. Also are you going to have Ranma try an emulate some of the other mutant powers? I don't see him being able to copy Rogues, the professors, or nightcrawlers powers but he could probably emulate some of storms. I can see him purposely electricuting himself to figure out how to create lightning (after all it's what his dad would do if he had seen storms power). How about taking some of the techniques he already knows and revising them he does that alot in the manga. For example use the soul of ice to actually freeze stuff or create an opposite to the soul of ice and set stuff on fire. If he lost his dad and fiancee he would probably have thrown himself into training so show him do some serious training. I like Ranma's mutant power but can he speed it up using ki? One last thing. Does Ranma still have instant curse powder, the broken koi rod, some of the pheonix mind control eggs his dad took, hypnosis spice, parylisis powder, small bombs, or some of the other stuff seen in the manga.
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Reviewed By: Macross_VF11 On: August 31, 2004 11:24 CDT
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Just keep the chapters coming and I'll be happy. :) BTW my vote is for Ranma/Nabiki
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Reviewed By: vasago On: August 31, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've used a underused crossover and done it well.I like how you've kept ranma and nabiki ic.But changed them enough that it shows they have become changed by there respective experances good work post soon.either jean or rogue for ranma wanda for nabiki
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Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 04:19 CDT
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Peoples wondered about the reasons Ranma would do such a thing. He has a heart, I wouldn't say he has a big heart, otherwise he wouldn't ever call anyone a bad name. He's sensitive to others pain, but rather impulsive and like most males, ignorant of the pain he does cause until it blows up in his face. As for Ranma owning up to what he did, I can see him doing so in a way, but not telling the girls directly. Xavier sure, Logan sure, and he'll more then likely get punished by them in such a way he'd wish he told the girls. I've debated with the possibility of crossing Evo Xavier with a little bit of Unlimited Xavier. I'll explain that when I finish the next chapter though, it's a rather interesting thought and would surely cause some hell in the story for everyone involved. Unlimited Xavier is scary.
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Reviewed By: Dragon^ On: August 31, 2004 04:18 CDT
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Great fic. My vote for Emma/Ranma match
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Reviewed By: darkbolt On: August 31, 2004 03:55 CDT
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Another great chapter. It's good to see ranma maturing in this story a bit thou i didn't really think he'd actually go and take those pictures because he has such a good heart and the impact that those pictures caused isn't something that he'd want on his conscience. So maybe you could make him own up and get his beating. I think it'd kinda make the x-men less fearful of him if he did that but otherwise a great chapter. Waiting for the introduction of Emma Frost, can't wait to see how you write that. Kepp up the good work
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Reviewed By: DarkKol [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I have enjoyed it so far and look forward to more chapters. I like how you have balanced out the characters and have played with the interactions of everyone. I can't think anything else to comment on so keep writing and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: G On: August 30, 2004 18:29 CDT
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keep going. we all like where you are going with this fic
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Title: what about stealing? blood?
Reviewed By: darkforceinc On: August 30, 2004 17:52 CDT
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Here are some things I wanted to ask you, writer-man ^^. 1) I wonder if ranma can just head out and do some minor theft from the upscale side of town instead. That is what the style of the silent thief is for after all, and he doesn't really care much about thievery in the manga anyways. He's more than capable of turning invisible, stealing some money, or read some guy's PIN code at the ATM, and then 'borrowing' said ATM card for a minor withdrawal. The amount of money he can get is far beyond what Nabiki is taking in at this point, all without robbing banks. 2)If nothing else, Ranma can steal food. He can easily get sufficient food from various mega-Walmart food stores without anyone even remotely caring if he hit several stores for minor items instead of one big load of stuff. It's much more harmless than the pictures and such. 3) Also, would his blood have medicinal values? Would it help fight diseases if injected into others? Can he sell bits of himself for cash? Seriously, a Ranma-brand serum cure-all would be kinda funny...let him be the first 'snake-oil-saleman' whose product actually works.
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