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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Title: Status Update Pt. 2
Reviewed By: Author again On: May 13, 2005 02:53 CDT
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Heh, didn't have enough room in the above post. I still haven't figured out how to space crap in these comments, other wise I would be able to give it that intelligent look I'm so fond of. In reply to the post below, I couldn't agree more. In fact, and I'm not so terribly surprised, no one has seen the major up coming shit in the rather obtuse way I'm known to write things. I hint, in a very subtle manner, things going on in the back ground. I'm not a big buff on giving antogonists their own little scenes, unless it's needed. Character development is one thing, intrigue and mystery is another. I like to leave people guessing, unsure of what's going to happen next. Anyone familiar with the Evolution series knows that almost immediatly after the dance ALL HELL breaks loose as mutants are revealed and the storm of prejudice descends on the populace. In fact, once I get the next chapter up either tomorrow, or the day after (There's a scene at the beginning I'm not happy with, and want to rewrite to make more sense) you'll notice a rather jarring shift back into the more physical combat aspect of the series. I've been carefully plotting the next 10 or so chapters, mainly on character development and the running/closing of tiny plot involving other, technically secondary, characters in the story thus far. Anyway, there's a heads up. Matdeception
| Title: Status Update
Reviewed By: The Author - Matty On: May 13, 2005 02:48 CDT
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Heya everyone! Let me try to get everything in here as quick as I can. No, the story is not dead, in fact I have the next chapter ready to go. I have, however, run into real life issues that have been seriously kicking my ass. Namely, work, sinus, lack of sleep, girl friend dropping the 'I'm pregnant' bomb on me. Joy. Work's been a major bitch, due to sinus attacks and the like. My sinus problems are completely my room mates fault, I've discovered. I have a minor allergy to dust, nothing overly big and generally it just causes sneexing. A culumitive effect, however, causes sinus attacks that floor me. I usually change the air filter in the air conditioner once a month, but because of my busy schedule my roomie was suppose to do it, and he did, sorta. He removed the filter and set it to the side. Yeah, that's it. So I've been breathing in non filtered air with a nasty dirty and dusty filter right next to it, which has been the primary cause of my hellish month. I should of realized, when at the beginning of the previous month everything seemed to be going my way (Hot chick I knew from high school, met her by chance, got laid and got a steady girl friend again. I took my boss on a five hour bitch fest that left him crying, and thanking me of all things. Got a raise too [uber]. And the internet from work was fixed). Everything turned to shit, at least work side, after that. Then the GF drops the bomb and I go apeshit on Trojan condoms. Anyway, I'lln post the new chapter soon.
| Reviewed By: Bob King of the Were-Lemurs On: May 12, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this fic and am sad to see that you've aparently abandoned it. I think your biggest problem was when Ranma and Nabiki end up in bayville. Everything leading up to that point, the deaths of Genma and the Tendo's, Ranma revenge, and all that was great, awesome even. However the story seems to drag after that. You need to find something to add conflict back to the story (non-romance related) Maybe Ranma has to go back to Japan to rescue Mystique who went back to collect an important family heirloom and was captured or something like that. Ryouga showing up again would be a good distraction as well.
| Title: hay!
Reviewed By: maga man On: February 27, 2005 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad your back we all miss you knowing you come back someday.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:36 CST
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Stupid spam filter validation. Sorry about the multiple posts.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:35 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:34 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:33 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: rhaziel07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i pray you update soon, currently my favorite fic anywhere. love that fact that jean may end up with ranma at the end(DIE SUMMERS DIE!!!!!HAHAHAHA). anyway, keep up the good work.
| Title: Status
Reviewed By: Matdeception I am On: February 02, 2005 03:43 CST
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Just thought I'd drop you a line. Writing stalled for this fic, and not because of anything bad persay. I found I had jury duty, and while there I discovered an inherit problem within the next chapter itself that I had to answer. It was a serious qeustion, and had to be answered. I didn't know if a certain character would do something, and it was pivotal that I found out. Now that I know the answer, I've worked on structuring and carefully laying plot development in the next chapter. I have 22 pages of text written for it, and I haven't even actually gotten to the dance yet, or the numerous huge scene's I have planned to give the characters involved something else to focus on for a little while besides the fucked up social interations currently taking place. Next chapter will, at the very least, introduce one new character, and a heavily altered character from the Ranma 1/2 manga into the main line. It'll also give some hints as to just what Ryoga is going through in Japan, his actions there are a side story in and of themselves, and I doubt I'll write it out until after the Day of Reckoning later on. Just a heads up. I'm at work right now, yippy! Matdeception
| Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: February 01, 2005 00:39 CST
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Please update, I love your fic!
| Title: could be true
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: October 29, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kheram Coldstar guess is right and so does the other fan's that agree's with him. Look like ranma and jean are going to a have baby.
| Reviewed By: Kheram Coldstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I probably won't get an answer from Mat, but does anyone besides me think that bacause of Wamda's use of her power that Jean is probably going to get pregnant from her "tryst" with Ranma?
| Title: say hi
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: October 28, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i wonder if he working on a huge update?
| Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hands down the best ranma/x-men story I've ever read. The story gives a very personal view of everyone involed while not getting bogged down on just that. The storyline is always moving forward. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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