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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 07, 2004 12:56 CDT
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I meant to ask. Are you going to have her drain Jean to get her point of view on what happened?
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 07, 2004 12:52 CDT
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Great chapter
| Title: Daaaaamn!
Reviewed By: Lynx_spiel On: September 07, 2004 04:46 CDT
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Heh, what a way to find out about that.
| Reviewed By: Shadowbakasama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:57 CDT
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Doing great so far, I'm checking your story every day. As for Ranma getting laid, well back in Nerima that sort of thing would get the entire cast after him in one way or another. Mousse would be for it if it wasn't with Shampoo, all the fiancees except the one getting some would be after him, except Akane who would be after him anyway for being a hentai. Ryouga and Kuno would be after him no matter what. Colonge would be after him if it wasn't Shampoo. Genma and Soun would be after him if it wasn't Akane, and dragging him kicking and screaming to the alter if it was. So in Nerima any sex had to be Top Secret and on the side, but can you imagine the sexual tension of having 3 hot chicks throwing themselves at you everyday? Now in the US he isn't engaged to anyone, and casual sex is OK and won't get him killed or married, just beat up. I think that Emma will be the next to seduce him, if she can, followed by Rouge, if and when she gets up the nerve, and finally Nabiki will rope him into an orgy with her and Wanda, leaving Tabitha maybe seducing him if she feels left out or gets really horny. Putting all that sex aside, for a longer lasting matchups I'd say Ranma+Rouge, Lance+Kitty, Risty(Mystique?)+Pietro, Tabitha+Toad, and Nabiki+Wanda+Kurt, leaving Scott trying to score with Jean.
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 06, 2004 15:47 CDT
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Great chapter. I'm really enjoying this
| Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: September 06, 2004 13:41 CDT
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Emma Frost
| Title: Jean knocked up?
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 10:46 CDT
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Wanda's ability to affect probability is a weak explanation of her powers. She is perhaps one of the strongest mutants ever introduced into the Evo verse pre-Apocolypse. Now, you need to ask yourself, is it in her favor to knock Jean up? Even I don't think she's emotionally capable of doing something like that, even if only for revenge. What she did should be obvious, but you won't see the effects for a few weeks yet. I'll be fun, and a perfect excuse for a cluster fuck if I've ever seen one. Besides, Pregnancy is a bit too far fetched IMO, still, I won't say yea or nay for it until I reach the point I'll deal with the situation. If the writing lends to it, then sure, but I personally wouldn't count on it.
| Reviewed By: Kaze-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 07:54 CDT
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Hmmm,i sense a disturbance in the force...What did Wanda exactly do to Jean? I know her powers alter probab....oy vey,pregnant Jean anyone?
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 06, 2004 03:48 CDT
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This chapter shows him to be human. I mean he made a possible mistake and he didn't try to get out of it. Also a good point was brought up about the fiancees.
| Reviewed By: Mogthegnome On: September 06, 2004 03:03 CDT
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you know, thats probably why im enjoying this fic so much. because it is real. Because it isnt the sterotypical view of ranma, the sexless perfect child. Though i don't know if he would have gone all the way with jean, he definately would have done something. Although i have NO clue how you would manage to work this into another person matchup now (most characters, on the list, minusing emma and rogue, would give up right then, and rogue would become even more depressed, probably), i have faith itll work out well. keep up the good writing.
| Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 16:23 CDT
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I'm not striving for inhuman characters. People have real problems, most of which is often ignored in fanfiction. I've realized I've been working quite a bit on social intereaction with this fic, and less on the 'Go kill the bad guy' type scenario these things usually fall into. Ranma, Jean, Nabs, everyone is human. They make human choices, and will likly reap human rewards/consequences. I've never believed Ranma Saotome was a saint, by any means of the word. He's human just like anyone else. Anyone who says crap like "He doesn't understand sex, has no practical knowledge of the act, ect. ect." are simply inferring, like the majority of fanfic readers, what they believe to be true from the Manga/Anime. I'm pretty damn sure I've never seen Takahashi write Ranma as if he was either sexually active, or as a asexual (Which most people like to write, we've noticed). So you can really either go for both sides of the argument. I'm more of a realist then anything else, so instead of following the status quo with Ranma, I've gone and turned him into something more human, with.. *gasp* real human desires and problems. I've recieved a crap load of emails about this chapter, most with one final sentence in it "Don't erase it, he's human in this fic." Seeing that, I've decided to keep it and simply build up from there. Thanks to everyone who emailed me, ect. ect.
| Reviewed By: eqrenthorn On: September 05, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic has been great so far, Jean scenario included. Those who say Ranma's actions are OOC make him out to be inhuman. The way this fic has been progressing, with all the angst, sexual tension, and human interaction, everything feels more real than Takahashi's version ever could. Granted, a little chaotic, but since when has Ranma's life been anything but? Good job, Matdeception.
| Reviewed By: Esanime On: September 05, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter is way OOC for Ranma, and to be honest it really doesn't fit into the story you've been writing in my opinion. Ranma is definately someone who doesn't deal well with close contact with the opposite sex, and Jean and him together doesn't really fit, but its your story so write what you feel is right.
| Reviewed By: Jackalson On: September 05, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Score one vote for the ridiculous option. (J/R/K/E anything w/ an XX chromosome pair... secondary mutation anyone? pheromones? *_*) This, this was odd, compelling but odd. I've seen you painting yourself into a corner before (the picture scam) so I won't be too worried about pulling this off believeably yet. Can't wait to see Scott's reaction though... but then again, he's not Jeans in this setting, nor is she his, but still I sense a great disturbance in the facade of fearless leader. ^_^ Looking forward to more, and btw; won't Ris.. Ahem Mystique totally freak out one of these days? I mean yeah, absentee parent but sheesh man. Yeah he's manly, but I doubt she was looking to bear the mega-playboy. (specially' since he's hanging around Rogue and vice versa). Thanks for sharing, can't wait to see how your going to pull this one out of the hat. ~JS
| Reviewed By: p00t On: September 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
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Jean or Nabiki. Rogue is just too weird cuz they are family.
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